The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
This chart shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women,as indicated on the y-axis from 0 to 100 hours. The x- axis indicates sex and employment states between 1998 and 1999.
By looking this chart you can say that unemployed an retired people spent more time for leisure activities than other employment status of People. Men around 80 hours and women approximately 70 hours. People who had full time job,they spent under 50 hours for leisure activities. Amount of leisure time men enjoyed around 50 hours and females approximately 40 hours. These are less than twice times unemployment and retired people’s spent time for leisure activities. Employed people also, spent less time for leisure than others.On other hand,men did not have part time and housewives employment status. Only women worked these employment status and each of them spent around 40 and 50 hours for leisure time.
By observing the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status, you can say people who did not have job,they spent more time for leisure activities.
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Sentence: By looking this chart you can say that unemployed an retired people spent more time for leisure activities than other employment status of People.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by an article
Suggestion: Refer to unemployed and an
People who had full time job,they spent under 50 hours
People who had full time job spent under 50 hours
men did not have part time and housewives employment status.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
Only women worked these employment status
Only women worked on these employment status
people who did not have job,they spent more time for leisure activities.
people who did not have job spent more time for leisure activities.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 185 200
No. of Characters: 883 1000
No. of Different Words: 90 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.688 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.773 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 37 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.622 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.537 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.658 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.247 0.07
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