In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
The weight of a person is a global criteria to roughly ascertain how healthy he/she is. It has been a matter of great concern for many people around the world to stay fit and weigh less whereas some people face a problem of constantly increasing body weight which makes them unhealthy.
In developed countries like U.S.A. and Australia the overage weight of people is showing a rising trend. This increased weight makes them look like meat balls and obese. One of the major reasons that people become obese is their eating habit. Many people across the globe have become bonded slaves to junk f...
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