The diagram shows a solar water-heating system from a contemporary home.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates with the advanced technology of solar water-heating system. Clearly, the heating process of water bases of the power of the solar panel which can be transformed from drainage systems.
To begin, the solar panel gained to heat and keep it in the drain cock, contained the heat water which affected from the process of solar panels, after that the pipe is flowing the water into the pump. Moreover, the pump must pump the water up on the wire to go inside the tank, this water is mixed with the working fluid, mixture of water and anti-freeze.
Inside the fresh water tank,...
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The diagram illustrates with the advanced technology of solar water-heating system
The diagram illustrates the advanced technology of solar water-heating system
the heating process of water bases of the power of the solar panel
the heating process of water is based on the power of the solar panel ???
from the downside and upside
from the downside to the upside
Due to inside the tank,
Due to being inside the tank,
one part to go out pass the overflow vent and another go in to the solar panel again
one part is to go out passing the overflow vent and another goes in to the solar panel again
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