Some people believe that subjects such as
Music, Arts, Drama and Creative Writing will
contribute a great deal to children’s
development; therefore they should take a
large part of the school timetable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
School plays a phenomenal role to set the foundation of success for everyone. Presently, it is argued that a large part of school's timetable should be given to classes of music, art, creative writing for superior development of students than other subjects. Here, I would like to accord with given statement.
There are multifarious points to support my point of view. First and foremost, classes of music, art and creative writing not only entertain students to feel relaxed but also encourage their interests towards education as these classes are more enjoyable than other subjects such as...
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at larger extent.
at a larger extent.
flaws:
More complex sentences wanted. Look, a lot of sentences start with subject 'they' or 'students'.
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