The claim that animals have “rights” has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?
It is an undeniable fact that every living creature has the right to live with respect and dignity in this world and they should be given an opportunity to experience their fundamental rights like food, clothes and shelter. Therefore, zoos are the place where all the necessary amenities are met for the animals. So, it is definitely not a good idea to ban zoos. I do not accord with the given statement.
To begin with, zoos are the safest place for the poor creatures as they are taken care well and their holistic needs are met at the time of necessity. For example, animals can be treated wel...
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