Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Taking a part-time job seems to be most teenagers' choice to earn some extra allowance. However, I disagree with the statement that parents should help their teenage children prepare for adult life through encouraging them to take a part-time job, because the job could be a distraction from schoolwork and a risky decision if they choose the wrong job.
Apart from the time spending on study, teenage kids probably do not have extra hours to work. If they insist taking a job, it might have a bad influence on their academic performance. Take my college roommate, Kathy, for example; she wanted t...
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