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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
It is true that the behaviour of young students has been becoming out of control in many parts of the world. There are a variety of possible reasons for this, and I believe that measures can certainly be taken to address the problem.
In my view, there are three main factors that contributed to misbehaviour of young people at school. Firstly, parents are too permissive these days. Many children have been used to pestering and eventually obtaining whatever they want. Apart from this, they find it difficult to comply with the instruction given by their teachers or schools rules. Secondly, mode...
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