Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do agree or disagree?
Schools are the integral part of one's life to become oneself mature and hone different academic abilities. However, the latest internet advancement has led some people to think that schools are no longer required as children could learn as well at home. I strongly disagree with the later idea.
There are manifold reasons why children always need schools. Firstly, children are not mature enough to go through vague and absurd information displayed in internet hence they obviously need ushering from their teachers on the particular topic to explain in more simplified way. Secondly, schools are...
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Thank you sir for the
Thank you sir for the suggestions and corrections.
When I start writing essays, complete sentence doesn't come on mind quickly and therefore I have to append each idea inside mind at the end of each sentence making sentences longer every time.
in more simplified way.
in a more simplified way.
to teach one's child how to use information from internet appropriately which is very unrealistic in many parts of the globe.
to teach one's child how to use information from internet appropriately, which is very unrealistic in many parts of the globe.
will do little to effect children education
will do little to affect children's education
a detailed information through interactive approach.
a detailed information through an interactive approach.
flaws:
You have developed some sentences which are correct grammatically, but are not proper logically, like:
'Schools are the integral part of one's life to become oneself mature and hone different academic abilities.'
You have this issue in other essays. The solutions is: develop simpler sentences. Vocabulary words should be used correctly.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 373 350
No. of Characters: 1963 1500
No. of Different Words: 208 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.395 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.263 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.709 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 154 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 127 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 86 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.867 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.04 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.359 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.6 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5