The information shows the ratio of dissimilar categories of families living in deprivation in Australia in 2000
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The information shows the ratio of dissimilar categories of families living in deprivation in Australia in 2000
The data presented indicates that one in seven of those family types is argued which all households were in 1,837,000. Then, couple with children type is surveyed in 9,333,000. For the next types, single (no children), sole parent, and couple (no children) are declared by indeterminate averages. Last, the lowest is displayed by single aged person and aged couple with 54,000 and 48,000.
Meanwhile, pie chart concluded that family types with percentage. The biggest parts are seen by sole parent and single (no children) with 21% and 19%. The second places are showed by couple with children and all households that converged percentages 12% and 11%. Eventually, the smallest rates are displayed by single aged person 6% and aged couple 4%.
In 2000, it is figured by both illustrations that the lowest rates are single aged person and age couple.
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