Air travel is cheap these days, allowing ordinary people to travel further. Some people say that airfare should be increased because this leads to environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The topic of whether increasing airfare can reduce the environmental pollution is of concern for many people. Some insist that air travel brings tremendous benefits to visitors while some others disagree. As for me, there are many alternative methods that can improve environment.
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