You recently attended a course and you found it different from the advertisement in the brochure. Write a letter to the college and say
- Give the description of the course.
- Explain what the difference was.
- Say what actions you expect the college to take.
Dear Sir,
I am writing you to inform, that I am very much disappointed with the course in which I currently have enrolled. Before joining the course, I consulted one of my friends, who also happens to be a student of your reputed college.
Taking his advice and reading the advertisement, that was printed in your college brochure; I decided to join the course of a finance, which is being taught by one of the eminent lecturer Ms. Lum. Unfortunately, after paying the full semester fees, I came to know that the course is not a part time course. Moreover, it is not the same lecturer, who will...
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 221 200
No. of Characters: 973 1000
No. of Different Words: 122 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.856 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.403 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.419 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 71 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.417 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.169 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.39 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.748 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.175 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4