Something in an airport delayed you and you have missed your flight. Write a letter to the airport's customer service department. In your letter include:•what delayed you•how missing this flight affected you•what you would like the airport to do about thi

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Something in an airport delayed you and you have missed your flight.
Write a letter to the airport's customer service department. In your letter include:
• what delayed you
• how missing this flight affected you
• what you would like the airport to do about this issue

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to request your attention regarding the flight I missed. Please allow me to elaborate on what happened.

Yesterday, I had a flight, ABZ123, scheduled to be taking off at 05:00 pm. I was supposed to arrive at the airport no later than 03:00 pm, and that was exactly what I did. I was following all the departing procedures, when, totally out of the blue, the company´s entire system came down, right on my turn to be checked in. For that reason, all my data had been corrupted into the database application, thus, not allowing me to proceed further dispatc...

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