These days many countries are facing different problems,so it is better that each country concentrates on solving its own problems, instead of co-operating with other countries.Do you agree or disagree?
Although every country have its own problems of varying degree, it is unrealistic to think they should focus on their own problems without considering any other nation, as it relegate back them from the mainstream due to various reasons. In this essay, I would like to state some strong points against the given statement.
To begin with, international co-operation fetches numerous benefits which contributes for the overall development of a nation. To be more clear, globalization has opened doors of diverse possibilities such as job opportunities, worldwide trade and commerce, optimum standard...
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Sentence: Although every country have its own problems of varying degree, it is unrealistic to think they should focus on their own problems without considering any other nation, as it relegate back them from the mainstream due to various reasons.
Suggestion: Although every country has its own problems of varying degree, it is unrealistic to think they should focus on their own problems without considering any other nation, as it relegates back them from the mainstream due to various reasons.
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