Your local newspaper would like to have a regular weekly feature on a subject of interest for readers. Readers are being encouraged to make suggestions sent in an e-email to the newspaper.
Write an e-mail to the newspaper. In your email:
-suggest a topic that you think would be popular
-say why it would be of interest
-explain why it is more relevant/interesting than other topics
Dear Sir/Madam,
I was delighted to know that your newspaper has decided to start a new weekly column that would cater to readers who are looking for some interesting subjects. Your initiative to ask for suggestions is also appreciated by local people. I would like to suggest a topic of financial planning that targets readers of all ages.
I suppose this topic would be an interesting one for your readers. Today, most of the people are busy in earning their bread and butter. However, they are unable to decide how they should manage their finances. This problem is common among people with al...
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Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 214 200
No. of Characters: 1067 1000
No. of Different Words: 120 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.825 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.986 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.842 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.332 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.592 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.049 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4