In many countries children are engaged in some kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
Working at a very young age has become a real thing happened in some countries, especially in developing ones. There are many factors that support it. Some of them are it can be a valuable working experience, an important step to learn, and a nice bridge to take responsibility. However, some other people believe that letting children work at a very young age is not a wise step to take.
Children who are permitted to work tend to be mature before they should be. It could be something positive as they will have a higher sense of responsibility towards the job they have. However, it...
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Sentence: Some of them are it can be a valuable working experience, an important step to learn, and a nice bridge to take responsibility.
Description: A verb 'to be', present tense, 2nd person singular or all is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to are and it
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 157 200
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.524 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.594 7.5
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 347 350
No. of Characters: 1535 1500
No. of Different Words: 157 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.316 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.424 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.309 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 87 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 62 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.524 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.594 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.286 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.304 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.465 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.105 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5