The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.
The line graph compares the number of visitors in two websites, relating new music over 15 days. It is apparent that, Pop Parades was the most popular websites throughout the periods except for the two days – on 12th and 13th.
Initially Pop Parade got 120,000 visits on day 1 while only 40 thousands of visitors for Music Choice websites. There was a huge fluctuation for the number of visitors for Music Choice websites until the 7th day where the website received a stable number of internet users (of around 30,000). For the week 1, the number of hits on Pop Parade site declined and reached its lowest hits of around 30,000. There was a significant increase of the visits on Pop Parade websites on day 9, after that, it continued to increase for 2 days; around 110,000 users and approximately 150,000 visitors. On the other hand, music choice showed the similar patterns of fluctuation of those of 5th to 7th day. On day 11, 120,000 visitors entered into the Music Choice Website whereas the count of visitors continuously declined for Pop Parade to reach at 80,000 on 13th. On the last three days, both of websites had a good number of visitors – 80,000, 165,000 and 170,000 for Pop Parades and 110,000, 120,000 and 70,000 for Music Choice.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2025-01-08 | Lethanh54 | 67 | view |
| 2024-12-11 | Giang Tran | 73 | view |
| 2024-12-11 | Giang Tran | 73 | view |
| 2024-12-11 | Giang Tran | 73 | view |
| 2024-12-11 | Giang Tran | 73 | view |
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 217 200
No. of Characters: 1003 1000
No. of Different Words: 107 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.838 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.622 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.393 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 78 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.111 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.174 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.488 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.577 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.153 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 2 4