problems related to decline tree
The passage asserts that population of yellow cedar is declining in North America and provides three reasons of support. The professor casts doubt on this point by saying that mentioned reasons provided by passage are not adequate and rebunks all of them.
First, the article states that insect parasites specially beetles attack cedar bark and will damage them. The lecturer, on the contrary, rebuts this view by explaining that cedar trees are much resistant than other types of tree species, since they produce chemical which is poisonous for parasites. He also avers that beetles attack sick trees, so they are not foundamental cause for declining of cedar.
Second, beers feed from cedar' bark which is contained sugar, since beers weaken cedar tree, according to the article. The lecturer debunks this point by arguing that beers are not main cause for decreasing in cedar population, sicne they never effect all population cross the North America. He also states that in some parts of mentioned region, population of cedar is declining, even though there are no beer overthere.
Third, the reading claims that changing in climate has effected root system of cedar trees. The professor repudiates this view and says that the passage has forgotten a tip about changing clamate in lower elevation which wethear is cold, although cedar tree are sensitive in higher elevation. So this passage's claim is not convincing.
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The passage asserts that population of yellow cedar
The passage asserts that the population of yellow cedar
by saying that mentioned reasons provided by passage are not adequate
by saying that mentioned the reasons provided by passage are not adequate
so they are not foundamental cause
so they are not the foundamental cause
beers are not main cause
beers are not the main cause
population of cedar is declining,
the population of cedar is declining,
the reading claims that changing in climate has effected root system of cedar trees.
the reading claims that the changing in climate has effected the root system of cedar trees.
in lower elevation which wethear is cold, although cedar tree are sensitive in higher elevation.
in a lower elevation where weather is cold, although cedar trees are sensitive in higher elevation.
Sentence: The professor casts doubt on this point by saying that mentioned reasons provided by passage are not adequate and rebunks all of them.
Error: rebunks Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: He also avers that beetles attack sick trees, so they are not foundamental cause for declining of cedar.
Error: foundamental Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The lecturer debunks this point by arguing that beers are not main cause for decreasing in cedar population, sicne they never effect all population cross the North America.
Error: sicne Suggestion: since
Sentence: He also states that in some parts of mentioned region, population of cedar is declining, even though there are no beer overthere.
Error: overthere Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The professor repudiates this view and says that the passage has forgotten a tip about changing clamate in lower elevation which wethear is cold, although cedar tree are sensitive in higher elevation.
Error: wethear Suggestion: weather
Error: clamate Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 11 12
No. of Words: 230 250
No. of Characters: 1164 1200
No. of Different Words: 126 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.894 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.061 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.33 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 79 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 62 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.909 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.064 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.393 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.63 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.161 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4