The chart below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the destinations of UK students who finished their degrees and postgraduate studies in 2008 that are not currently engaged in full-time employment.
It is obvious that the number of graduate students far exceeds the number of postgraduate students, but the distribution of choices is quite similar with little differences. Notably, the most popular destination for both groups is to pursue further education, but looking at the second chart, one can see that taking a part-time job is also a popular choice among postgraduate students, behind only by a small margin of less than 200 students from the top choice.
Among graduate students, most either end up employed as part-time workers or unable to find a job. The former exceeds the latter by just over a thousand students. In contrast, only about a fifth of postgraduate students ends up unemployed. There are only a small proportion of students, both graduates and postgraduates, who is engaged in voluntary work.
In summary, apart from doing a full-time job, the top destination for graduate and postgraduate students after graduation is to seek further education, followed by part-time work. A great proportion ends up unemployed while a small fraction does voluntary work.
- The following diagrams shows a current map of Peyton Park and plans for proposed changes Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant 78
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 11
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 73
- Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world.Discuss the effects lack of experience with and understanding of nature can have on children as they grow up. Give reason 78
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