Bar Graph description (coffee and meat consumed in selected countries)
The bar graphs elucidate the amount of coffee and meat consumption in 5 Western countries (Norway, France, Germany, USA and Russia) and 2 Asian countries of Japan and China.
It is apparent that the meat was the most popular food in Western countries except for Russia. In addition to this, the coffee was the least popular drink among seven countries.
USA citizens ate the most grams of meat (122 kg per person) compared to other Western regions, except for Russia; Norway (60kg), France (72 kg) and Germany (87 kg). Meanwhile 47 kg of meat for Chinese and 42 kg of meat for Japanese were recorded. Russian recorded the third lowest feeding meat in all countries as well as in western countries. Russian people consumed the meat a third of USA people's meat consumption.
On the other hand, the coffee reached below 10kg for all countries, with the highest coffee intake of Norway (9kg). This followed closely for German as they drank 7kg of coffee per person. The rest of countries drank lesser than 5kg of coffee – equal amount of coffee was drunken by French and Russia of 5, USA of 4. The lowest coffee intaking region was China (of 2kg) and Japanese took 1kg more than those of Chinese.
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.802 4.0
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