The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is a visual providing illustrations of the phases and tools used in cement-making process combined with how cement is used to manufacture concrete for construction purposes.
From the first glance at the visuals one of the first fact to note in the former is that the cement-making process contains a number of stages whereas the concrete production consists of two main phases.
Regarding the first diagram the process launches when the limestone and clay are made powder by means of crusher, the powder is conducted through the mixer with the help of thin turbine in order to get heat in...
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Sentence: The particular process ends with mixering the concrete.
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