The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
The chart depicts seven different reasons for adults to study, while the second chart gives information about how the costs of each course should be divided.
Form the bar chart, it is evident that the main reason influencing adults to study is having interest in subject, at 40%. It is not far different from the previous reason, gaining qualifications comes in second place, at 38%. 22 % of the population think that their study is helpful for current job. The same percentage of people, at 20%, believe in the possibility of promotion and enjoy learning and studying. Just a few pople study as t...
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Sentence: Just a few pople study as to be able to change jobs and meet people.
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Sentence: The costs of each course sould be shared among tax payers based on the opinion of 25 of people.
Error: sould Suggestion: No alternate word
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.534 4.0
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