the graph below gives the information about the number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad

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the graph below gives the information about the number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad

The line graph illustrate the alteration in the number of cases of Diarrhea in Mashhad over the 10 years since 1983 to 1992.

It is observed that in the beginning of period, in 1983, Diarrhea in Mashhad stood at 100 cases and remained slightly static over the next two years. The number of cases initially steady increased at 1985 at 200 cases. But this was not to last due to in 1987, the figures saw a significant fall back to the 1983’s cases. This was followed by another increased, although enormous steeper, in 1989 when the cases were almost 300 cases higher than 1988. However this upward trend was gradually decrease and stay in the same level at 350 cases until 1991. After which cases figures was plummeted dramatically until nothing case left in 1992.

To sum it up, cases of Diarrhea in Mashhad shows some fluctuation over the 1983 to 1992. Besides, there was the highest figures in 1989 at 400 cases while the weakest figures could be observed in the end of period.

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The line graph illustrate the alteration
The line graph illustrates the alterations

since 1983 to 1992.
from 1983 to 1992.

due to in 1987,
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This was followed by another increased
This was followed by another increase

the cases were almost 300 cases higher than 1988.
the cases were almost 300 cases higher than that in 1988.

this upward trend was gradually decrease and stay in the same level
this upward trend was gradually decreased and stayed in the same level

To sum it up, cases of Diarrhea in Mashhad shows some fluctuation over...
To sum it up, the cases of Diarrhea in Mashhad show some fluctuations over...

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