Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The food we eat today is much healthier than in the past.
The healthier body we have, the better life we live. The impact of what we eat on our health have been accepted from many years ago, also proved by many scholars nowadays. The term of healthy food is mostly discussed nowadays in social media, in T.V shows and also among ordinary people conversations. But the main question here is, do our food and its production are healthier nowadays than before. In my opinion food in the past which our ancestors consumed was much healthier than now.
The dramatic increased of population of recent centuries resulted in a huge demand for food which previously production system couldn’t tolerate this demand. The results of this unbalance demand and supply is bringing new methods to product foods, like genetic changes of plants to produce more and tolerate the harsh conditions. While these genetic changes resulted in a more production, they bring new form of diseases to people who consume these kind of foods like many allergic diseases. Therefore, the food which is produced nowadays is less healthy for people than past because of some genetic changes of plants.
After considering the source of food, here should be mentioned the type of food which consumed nowadays. The habit of people to eat changed because of modern life. Most of people prefer fast food rather than traditional food because of it’s price and saving the time. Fast food is a pre prepared foods like hamburgers which in stores heated just in few minutes and ready to give to consumer. To preserve them from the damaging, the companies put a lot of chemicals in them. These chemicals cause fatal diseases to people like cancer. I read an article on web which stated pre prepared foods increase the chance of getting cancer to more than twenty hundred percent. While there stated smoking cigarettes have the same number, we should really concern about fast food.
To give a summery to above mentioned discussion, I should advocate the notion that traditional foods which produced in the past and the food was eaten by our ancestors, is definitely healthier than present foods. The cause of the harmfulness of that is the modern life and huge demand for food in the world because of population increase, which needs a really huge effort to increase people awareness about that.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-08-18 | amirbahman | 90 | view |
| 2016-06-18 | amirbahman | 78 | view |
| 2016-02-16 | mratabak | 80 | view |
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The food we eat today is much healthier than in the past. 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in sponsoring arts than in athletics (like state Olympics team). 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most business people are only motivated by the desire of money. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The purpose of television is to educate not to entertain 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... also proved by many scholars nowadays. The term of healthy food is mostly discusse...
^^^
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...iscussed nowadays in social media, in T.V shows and also among ordinary people co...
^
Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... form of diseases to people who consume these kind of foods like many allergic diseases. T...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
... to eat changed because of modern life. Most of people prefer fast food rather than traditiona...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'of its price'?
Suggestion: of its price
...od rather than traditional food because of it’s price and saving the time. Fast food is a pre...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I should advocate the notion that traditional foods which produced in the past and the food was eaten by our ancestors, is definitely healthier
I should advocate the notion that traditional foods which were produced in the past and the food which was eaten by our ancestors, is definitely healthier
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'kind of', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.267303102625 0.229887763892 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.138424821002 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105011933174 0.0866891130778 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0525059665871 0.046263068375 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.035799522673 0.0685040099705 52% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147971360382 0.118717715034 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0429594272076 0.0351676179071 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46674359475 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0286396181384 0.0309702414327 92% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0954653937947 0.0887237588012 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00715990453461 0.0209618222197 34% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0238663484487 0.0139019557991 172% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2304.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 387.0 408.028673835 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95348837209 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369509043928 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255813953488 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173126614987 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103359173127 0.112833075102 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46674359475 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514211886305 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 56.3047614642 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3684210526 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2380866477 48.84282405 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.263157895 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3684210526 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.644075263715 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 45.9498164015 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 2.02105263158 1.45489161554 139% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36471985169 0.300154397459 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.140194638793 0.103427244359 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0522036966541 0.0752933317313 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.521547600658 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123780845931 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164746970671 0.114077575197 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872882939504 0.0781384742642 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.424571856378 0.336927656856 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.111022895234 0.067059652881 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290366186085 0.210909579961 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938605927646 0.0618886996521 152% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
--------------------------
Rates: 81 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 24 Out of 30