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The reading passage gives us information about the Sydney Opera House and how it can be categorized as an architecture object, at the same time, the lecturer avers that she disagrees with it due to the fact that the building is a unique masterpiece of modern architecture. To prove her stance she provides arguments which are discussed below in details.
To begin with, the text clearly claims that the Opera House belongs to international style, however, the speaker does not concur with it, because the building does not match with some of the main characteristics of the style, for instance, it is highly imaginative.
Secondly, the writer believes that the Sydney Opera House represents the organic style, at the same time, the lecturer only partly agrees with the statement. She accepts that some of famous and well-known scholars who adhere to the organic style indeed were involeved in the project but the building violates one of the main maxims of the style: the appearance of building is not functional and conspicously was constructed to please spectators.
Finally, it is said in the passage that computer technology has been used to create the building. Although this information is true, it is mistaken to aver that the Sydney Opera House represents the hightech style. The lecturer suggests that the opera is a product of elaborate engineering which was usedto embody the beauty.
Consequently, the speaker sticks to the statement that the Opera House cannot be attributed to any particular style, instead it is a unique masterpiece of modern architecture.
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Sentence: She accepts that some of famous and well-known scholars who adhere to the organic style indeed were involeved in the project but the building violates one of the main maxims of the style: the appearance of building is not functional and conspicously was constructed to please spectators.
Error: conspicously Suggestion: conspicuously
Error: involeved Suggestion: involved
Sentence: Although this information is true, it is mistaken to aver that the Sydney Opera House represents the hightech style.
Error: hightech Suggestion: high tech
Sentence: The lecturer suggests that the opera is a product of elaborate engineering which was usedto embody the beauty.
Error: usedto Suggestion: used to
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Score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 9 12
No. of Words: 257 250
No. of Characters: 1286 1200
No. of Different Words: 133 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.004 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.004 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.79 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 67 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.556 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.962 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.436 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.733 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4