Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Well, change is the law of nature as well as inevitable part of everyday life. It is face of life. The social environment in which we live changes daily. Whereas, some people are happy with their routine life. while, others embrace change and prefer a challenging world where events are unpredictable.
There are manifold points to explain former view. First and foremost, people who do not want to step outside has lack of confidence to face variety in world. To be specific, they feel that their routine gives them structure and management and even not fond of surprises as they have no value for that. Hence, they are not capable to take challenge therefore remains happy in their daily habits. In addition, they fear the uncertainty of the unknown and may associate change with negative outcomes. As a result, such people remain satisfy in their knitting web and do not want to move from it.
Numerous points to shore up later view. people who are in favor of change may dislike monotony of routine as they want to explore new things. To explain, they seek adventure and excitement to get change from their hectic schedule of life. Thus, they have optimistic outlook to life and view change is good thing according to their opinion. what is more, change has been associated with forward thinking, technology, innovation, a modern lifestyle. however, change often means leaving behind traditional, simpler ways of living and wishing move to a time where things are supposed to be better.
From my notion, both view has their own significance. Daily routine gives you proper time management and discipline but i still think that changes are very lucrative in everyone life so that we can relish our life with happiness and enjoyment.
To recapitulate, to maintain stability in life daily routine plays phenomenal role while change is unavoidable and necessary if someone want to keep with the past face of life. Finally, I believe whether change is good or bad depends on someone's view of a situation.
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Discourse Markers used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250652741514 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.161879895561 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109660574413 0.0946595960268 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0496083550914 0.0501214627716 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0600522193211 0.0437548338989 137% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11227154047 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0156657963446 0.0403226058552 39% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.61698971136 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0443864229765 0.0326793684256 136% => OK
Particles: 0.00261096605744 0.00163938923432 159% => OK
Determiners: 0.0365535248042 0.0861772015684 42% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00783289817232 0.021408717616 37% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0156657963446 0.011925033212 131% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2038.0 1933.35771543 105% => OK
No of words: 339.0 316.048096192 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01179941003 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.351032448378 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.250737463127 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159292035398 0.203846283523 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115044247788 0.137316102897 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61698971136 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.037074148 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581120943953 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 65.4020045667 60.7387585426 108% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.1428571429 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1647777265 49.517814964 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0476190476 127.492653851 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.904761904762 0.814263465372 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 3.99599198397 275% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.2166034555 49.1944974215 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.39423076923 1.69124875643 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317659815743 0.332605444948 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0740285482242 0.102741220458 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0692404431746 0.0668466124924 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.479869681397 0.534860350844 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157951229702 0.148594505496 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108572096122 0.134430193775 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616084813712 0.0742795772207 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.232007441326 0.324371583561 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.133887963261 0.0638462369009 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194090869389 0.228012699653 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505087305908 0.058150111329 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.68436873747 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 5.90881763527 203% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9