Nowadays, as women and men have to work full time, household duties should be equally divided. Do you agree or disagree?
People have different views about whether or not men and women should have equal responsibilities for household chores. From my point of view, I believe that household work should be allocated equally for both husbands and wives.
There are many reasons why husbands and wives should share domestic responsibilities.Traditional gender roles are gradually changing; women need to go to work instead of staying at home to bring up their children in the past. For example, besides the workload they have to take in the office, women are also responsibilities for the housework. Thus, the burden put on their shoulder is even more than before. When the working women are forced to do all the housework without any help, it has a very negative effect on their mental and physical well-being.
When couples share the responsibilities of domestic life, they set a good example for their children. Children raise in such families will learn the value of empathy and they will share the responsibilities with their respective partners when they grow up. Besides, sharing the chores will make the couples closer in their relationship, resulting in improving the quality of their marital life. For instance, after dinner, husbands can do clean floor while wives can do washing dishes.
In conclusion, I think that working couples should be encouraged to share the responsibilities of their daily life. It is one of the important things to keep happy in their family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Traditional
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259541984733 0.247107548796 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.145038167939 0.15552993741 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0725190839695 0.0946569551029 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0381679389313 0.0501201869031 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0687022900763 0.0437536398559 157% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13358778626 0.122223957237 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0381679389313 0.0403219363162 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.16385438636 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0267175572519 0.0326786765898 82% => OK
Particles: 0.00763358778626 0.00163938923432 466% => Too many particles.
Determiners: 0.0725190839695 0.0861751148067 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0343511450382 0.0214082191602 160% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0152671755725 0.0119246538136 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1464.0 1933.38276553 76% => OK
No of words: 238.0 316.052104208 75% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12552301255 6.10592293882 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20519365927 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.327731092437 0.37474360046 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268907563025 0.284197041944 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163865546218 0.203843217982 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.100840336134 0.137313986986 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16385438636 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600840336134 0.560935902166 107% => OK
Word variations: 61.4788545356 60.7401812628 101% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0911823647 75% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8333333333 20.7725350517 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4470043147 49.5273876611 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.272 93.4120437189 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.424 15.2821509519 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.528 0.594174754866 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01102204409 40% => OK
Readability: 46.7240896359 49.1922392462 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.71212121212 1.69127372897 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161408697938 0.332604825255 49% => More coherence wanted between essay topic and essay body.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.128417514806 0.102734651613 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0907071944499 0.0668474354756 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.602775710297 0.534917948617 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141005379955 0.148666948902 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765382674925 0.13441755203 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754018115354 0.0742828286743 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.278968484734 0.324241079732 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.102782123628 0.0640056729886 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13249803466 0.22793763319 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102347716427 0.0582452615562 176% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41883767535 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.88977955912 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.60220440882 38% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.00200400802 100% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.493987976 86% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.5 Out of 9