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TPO24 - Integrated TOEFL essay
In this set of material, the reading passage claims that the recent discoveries of inside of a dinosaur's bone reveal that the tissues of the animal might still remain. However, the lecturer finds all the ideas dubious and skeptical and provides some evidence to refute them all.
First of all, the author of the passage states that a soft organic substance is found in the small channels inside the bone which may relate to the remained tissues of the blood vessels. In contrast, the lecturer declares that the soft materials inside the hollows may not necessarily be residues of blood ...
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Category: Excellent Excellent
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No. of Words: 287 250
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No. of Different Words: 139 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.116 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.787 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.342 2.4
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Avg. Sentence Length: 26.091 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.733 7.5
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