modern technology is cause for human redundant
There are certainly number of accepted reasons that are for evidence that advance of modern technology is cause for human redundant, this problem are new because people in past generation wasn’t confront problems such that, in this essay I will try to understand cause of this issue and in the end I will try to purpose a solution.
At first I think people should be encourage to approach a problem from different perspective, I mean we must know all of cause for this issue first in modern world technology is promote every minute so advance new tolls and technology in everyday, but most of these technology don’t need for everyone in everywhere for example some of them are for motivate people for buy a new model tools, I should say some of people have behavior problem so they for their pride and some other for their envy go to companies trap.
This problem can be solved by solve behavior problem in people, when it comes to point, people have to make right decision. Behavior problem such surplus pride is very bad for a human because this is cause for do works irrational for example buying tools and vehicles and other things only for their pride, this problem is solved when they learn morality. In the other case of behavior problem people have envy to other people and this is a reason of motivate them for anything that is irrational.
As a result on the basis of points mentioned above I can’t safely say that this problem isn’t relate with modern technology because modern advertising is a product of the modern technology that motivate people in everyday but I can say maximum of this problem is for problem behavior in people and best solution for that is educate morality in society for example in media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...n. At first I think people should be encourage to approach a problem from different pe...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'approaching'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: approaching
...irst I think people should be encourage to approach a problem from different perspective, I...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: OF_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'of course' (=naturally)?
Suggestion: of course
...nt perspective, I mean we must know all of cause for this issue first in modern world te...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'promoted'.
Suggestion: promoted
...sue first in modern world technology is promote every minute so advance new tolls and t...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... so advance new tolls and technology in everyday, but most of these technology don’t nee...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...and technology in everyday, but most of these technology don’t need for everyone in everywhere f...
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'tool'?
Suggestion: tool
...for motivate people for buy a new model tools, I should say some of people have behav...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...for buy a new model tools, I should say some of people have behavior problem so they for their...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...dern technology that motivate people in everyday but I can say maximum of this problem i...
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Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'educated'.
Suggestion: educated
...in people and best solution for that is educate morality in society for example in medi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'i mean', 'i think', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.283018867925 0.229887763892 123% => OK
Verbs: 0.14465408805 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100628930818 0.0866891130778 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0251572327044 0.046263068375 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0503144654088 0.0685040099705 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.172955974843 0.118717715034 146% => OK
Participles: 0.0157232704403 0.0351676179071 45% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.42337336926 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0220125786164 0.0309702414327 71% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0880503144654 0.0887237588012 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0220125786164 0.0209618222197 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0157232704403 0.0139019557991 113% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1739.0 2387.08602151 73% => OK
No of words: 304.0 408.028673835 75% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72039473684 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345394736842 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243421052632 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141447368421 0.174417080927 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0756578947368 0.112833075102 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42337336926 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467105263158 0.524397521467 89% => OK
Word variations: 45.7369417847 59.2087087015 77% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6684587814 29% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 50.6666666667 20.5533526081 247% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 138.616677688 48.84282405 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 289.833333333 120.699889404 240% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.6666666667 20.5533526081 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 0.644075263715 207% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.54480286738 180% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 75.0087719298 45.7405998639 164% => OK
Elegance: 2.14285714286 1.45489161554 147% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333156624099 0.300154397459 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.253481899346 0.103427244359 245% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0951911262458 0.0752933317313 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.827212394349 0.497263757937 166% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184694275754 0.151897553556 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19075321268 0.114077575197 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101367622905 0.0781384742642 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.413909061118 0.336927656856 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0463608079532 0.067059652881 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237591140357 0.210909579961 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220020440659 0.0618886996521 36% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8870967742 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 8.42114695341 12% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.6433691756 44% => More topic words wanted.
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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