Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
As a result our hometown has a very important effect on our lives. If a movie theater were going to be built in my hometown I am sure some people would support it and other would oppose with it. In my view adding a movie theater would not be a good idea for several reason:
The main reason is that addition will create a lot of noises and traffic to the region , people who would come to see the movie most likely are coming to have fun with children and family , along with so much noises Of Course and needed some space in order to park their vehicles that they came with, for example I have a friend of mine that a Cinema were built near her home, for that matter, she and her neibers had been Suffered from lack Of space for park their vehicles outside,traffic all the time and noises that children and some adult people were making late night . These people wouldn't have had those problem if it were not because of the Cinema.
Another reason for my opinion is, I believe in order to build something in such a big space ,there are better idea which would not create those problems that I just mentioned. For example adding a library would be a positive idea because not only it create a good way for resident to study more, but it makes the rigen more quite .the residents would not have had such a good source for Extend their knowledge easily and near their home if it weren't because of the library.
In sum , through some people may support the plan that would not be a great addition, not only it creates so much noise and traffic, but the space could be use in better ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As a result our hometown has a very import...
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Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...ie theater would not be a good idea for several reason: The main reason is that addition...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot be a good idea for several reason: The main reason is that addition will cr...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... lot of noises and traffic to the region , people who would come to see the movie ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing to have fun with children and family , along with so much noises Of Course and...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ith children and family , along with so much noises Of Course and needed some space ...
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Suggestion: , traffic
...Of space for park their vehicles outside,traffic all the time and noises that children a...
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Suggestion: .
...some adult people were making late night . These people wouldnt have had those pro...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...e were making late night . These people wouldnt have had those problem if it were not b...
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Line 5, column 607, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'those problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; those problems
...e night . These people wouldnt have had those problem if it were not because of the Cinema. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if it were not because of the Cinema. Another reason for my opinion is, I beli...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r to build something in such a big space ,there are better idea which would not cr...
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Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
... be a positive idea because not only it create a good way for resident to study more, ...
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Suggestion: .
... more, but it makes the rigen more quite .the residents would not have had such a ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...wledge easily and near their home if it werent because of the library. In sum , ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... if it werent because of the library. In sum , through some people may support...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ent because of the library. In sum , through some people may support the pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for example, of course, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34782608696 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06669712941 2.67179642975 77% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.1344086022 209% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.872005409 48.9658058833 390% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.714285714 100.406767564 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.7142857143 20.6045352989 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917509696118 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043351073219 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310414463034 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606666417427 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00900690773231 0.0645574589148 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 11.7677419355 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.77 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.84 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.0537634409 187% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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