Modern technology has brought about changes in the roles of men and women. Discuss some of these changes. Do you think these changes have been beneficial?
Nowadays, modern technology has created a more developed world. Doubtlessly, human quality of life has become easier and more comfortable as a result of the latest technological advancements. Unbelievable and significant breakthroughs have been achieved in different spheres taking human minds to superior levels. Fortunately, not only people s lifestyle has been improved; but also their way of thinking. A more open-minded society has been emerging lately influenced by the effects of technology. We are living an age of social transformations and acceptance. Definitely, one of those changes is regarding the roles of men and women.
Before the technological revolution the world is going through now, there was an unequal society in terms of genders and their rights. Chauvinism remained in mostly every social sphere. Stereotypes underestimated women s value and capacity. For many years, females were not taking account as a work force. They lived under the male s shadow. Their place was at home and their job was to be a good wife and a nurturer. On the other hand, men represented the strength and intelligence. They were the only capable of doing the hard work.
As time went by, technology was replacing the manual labor force with sophisticated and easy-manageable machines. Many industries were expanded and new businesses were opened. The large-scale productions triggered the necessity of new and fresh workers. In those circumstances, women stepped in and they found a vacancy in many factories and the agricultural industry .Then, they started to occupy the place that was for many years considered only for men.
Last but not least, to make our lives easier, at home we count with electronic devices that save us time and effort when doing the chores. For example, refrigerators maintain the food fresh, microwaves shorten the cook time, vacuums make the cleaning of the house and washing machines do the laundry quickly. Therefore, women are able to have a career without failing their duty at home.
Finally, despite the prevailing gender discrimination, technology has boosted equality among genders creating more job opportunities and facilitating our lives. Hence, females are no longer considered efficient and prepared just for the house chores. They have gained their place in the job market as well as men. Therefore, I strongly believe that modern technology has rejected the different treatment towards women and has influenced a positive change regarding sexism.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'hence', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'as for', 'as to', 'for example', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275 0.229887763892 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.168181818182 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102272727273 0.0866891130778 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0545454545455 0.046263068375 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0386363636364 0.0685040099705 56% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0954545454545 0.118717715034 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0681818181818 0.0351676179071 194% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.02379592815 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0113636363636 0.0309702414327 37% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0886363636364 0.0887237588012 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0209618222197 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00681818181818 0.0139019557991 49% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2502.0 2387.08602151 105% => OK
No of words: 393.0 408.028673835 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36641221374 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.391857506361 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.307888040712 0.251872472559 122% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211195928753 0.174417080927 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.160305343511 0.112833075102 142% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02379592815 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590330788804 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 70.6516681933 59.2087087015 119% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1153846154 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.029799087 48.84282405 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2307692308 120.699889404 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1153846154 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 45.9041886866 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.67826086957 1.45489161554 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317414518128 0.300154397459 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.051794460147 0.103427244359 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0466908427781 0.0752933317313 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.432359573817 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136971049298 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975384718129 0.114077575197 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689512779457 0.0781384742642 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.328410048931 0.336927656856 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0862705664843 0.067059652881 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196031740936 0.210909579961 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820443543456 0.0618886996521 133% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30