A small town vs. a big city
Some people like big city while others think the small town is better than the big one. To me, I choose big city because it presents many facilities to live and you can use all of advantages; A big city offers professional education centers, and you have choices of job positions more than small city.
A big city has many professional education centers that give us to use professional course with good teachers. If you want to learn a foreign language, you are able to find some native teachers. If you like to be a good chief, you can use the courses which teach international foods. If you are interested to play one of the music instruments, you can find the one of the best players in country. For example, last year, I wanted to learn about a software called “WMS” which is a special program for water engineering. Since I live in small city, I couldn’t find anyone to teach me that. I had to read the help of software to learn that it took my many days. Later, I heard that my friend could learn the same software for some day in a center which specially consider water engineering programs!
The other advantages of big city is the existing more job position than small town. If your expertise filed is matched with your town conditions it’s OK, otherwise you need to search for job to big city that you have more chances to take good job than small one. As an instance, my friend who is a mechanic engineer that lives in a small town couldn’t find proper job because his living town isn’t an industrial area and he had to go to big city working to factory.
Although some people prefer small town, I think the big city is better. In my opinion, big city presents more professional education centers and chances to find job than small town.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'i think', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.168571428571 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.122857142857 0.0866891130778 142% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0171428571429 0.046263068375 37% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0857142857143 0.0685040099705 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108571428571 0.118717715034 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0171428571429 0.0351676179071 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.50365364175 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0514285714286 0.0309702414327 166% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0742857142857 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0114285714286 0.0209618222197 55% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0171428571429 0.0139019557991 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1777.0 2387.08602151 74% => OK
No of words: 321.0 408.028673835 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53582554517 5.86048508987 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.258566978193 0.338922669872 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.190031152648 0.251872472559 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.140186915888 0.174417080927 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0903426791277 0.112833075102 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50365364175 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473520249221 0.524397521467 90% => OK
Word variations: 47.3847904224 59.2087087015 80% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6331308073 48.84282405 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.466666667 120.699889404 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.644075263715 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 40.4031152648 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.34736842105 1.45489161554 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287317202223 0.300154397459 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.145485442466 0.103427244359 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0835333019503 0.0752933317313 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.546018560165 0.497263757937 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153958923585 0.151897553556 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14766515853 0.114077575197 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136297259691 0.0781384742642 174% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.386039621551 0.336927656856 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0598120760881 0.067059652881 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289761713239 0.210909579961 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141263443484 0.0618886996521 228% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations to cover all aspects.