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The text and lecture offer two opposite views on the accuracy of the assumption which asserts the real owner of the full-length portrait is Jane Austen. While the text lists some reasons and factors such as approval of the family members in 1882, resemblance among the portrait and Cassandra's sketch, and the periods of painter's professional activities and Austen's teenager are contemporary as the main evidence for this surmise, the professor counters these specific points and presents some clues to call into question for the information in reading passage and came to her conclusion.
First of all, the professor refutes the veracity of approval of family members about the possessor of the portrait in the letter in 1882 which in the reading part is nominated as one of the main evidence. Since the lecturer states that this permeation was released by the date about 70 years after Austen's death, and those family members did not have this chance to get familiar with her before her death. Thus, that how the professor cast doubt on the accuracy of this clue.
Next, although the passage uses the surmise of resemblance features between the portrait and the sketch as a hint of this assumption, the professor doubts the truth of this claim. As he mentioned Austen family was an extended family; besides, Jane possessed lots of nieces and cousins who were similar to Jane. Especially, he mentioned to two girls who were totally identical to Jane.
Finally, the lecturer argues that this portrait was painted by Ozias Humphrey. Meanwhile, the passage presumes that as his professional period was in the same duration when Jane was a teenager. Based upon the lecturer's evidence the painting does not belong to Ozias Humphrey and a sole clue for this event is the style of painting which has belonged to Humphrey. However, since the clothing which has been used for painting was sold by William Leg, and he sold this clothing in London when Jane was 27 years old; consequently, she was an adult on that period and this portrait did not belong her.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'such as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.300531914894 0.261695866417 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.127659574468 0.158904122519 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0478723404255 0.0723426182421 66% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0292553191489 0.0435111971325 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0239361702128 0.0277247811725 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.146276595745 0.128828473217 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0239361702128 0.0370669169778 65% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.52152984628 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0212765957447 0.0208969081088 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.148936170213 0.128158765124 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0158828679856 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0239361702128 0.0114777025283 209% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2056.0 1645.83664459 125% => OK
No of words: 347.0 271.125827815 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92507204611 6.08160592843 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.04852973271 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342939481268 0.374372842146 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279538904899 0.287516216867 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.204610951009 0.187439937562 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0893371757925 0.113142543107 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52152984628 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 145.348785872 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515850144092 0.539623497131 96% => OK
Word variations: 54.560866088 53.8517498576 101% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0529801325 92% => OK
Sentence length: 28.9166666667 21.7502111507 133% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.5072713928 49.3711431718 193% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.333333333 132.220823453 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9166666667 21.7502111507 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 0.878197800319 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 56.8705571566 50.5018328374 113% => OK
Elegance: 2.60294117647 1.90840788429 136% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.732437937461 0.549887131256 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.183195842259 0.142949733639 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.121774634497 0.0787303798458 155% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.628954066252 0.631733273073 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137438258374 0.139662658121 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.348829634809 0.266732575781 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163585635937 0.103435571967 158% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.471142752881 0.414875509568 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107847942228 0.0530846634433 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.553482497405 0.40443939384 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597618503609 0.0528353158467 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.26048565121 141% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.1766004415 189% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.2958057395 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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