It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.
What do you think is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime?
What solution can you offer to deal with this situation?
Although some people consider that teenager crime would be because of media and its violence content, in my view a variety reasons exist and I completely argue that media would be one of them. So we need to discuss the reasons raising the juvenile crime because of media and the way to prevent or decrease its rate.
The mass media focus on violent and sensational crimes and crime is one of the main subjects of most news programs. We mentioned two considerably important reasons of why media has negative effects on teenagers. First of all, people especially teenagers are looking for role models, and it seems that they attract criminals in movies because they think that they are cool. For example in some kind of movies, good people are usually victim or loser of a crime, therefore, at that ages the most annoying issue for a teenager is being a loser, so he/she tries to repeat the behavior of their favorite criminal actor. Secondly, talk about violent behavior repeatedly on media, might make the embarrassing and not acceptable face of that action, normal and regular, and as a result of that people behave aggressively or use violence as a usual action. Then the violence and aggressiveness enforce committing crime to achieve whatever people want. Then, media has affected people in different way which we mentioned some of them above.
The solutions to resolve the increase of juvenile adequacies are like enforcing the observations and using age limitation for Medias. At first, government should plan a powerful observation on media activities. It means; for instance, government forces the directors to produce less violent movies. Besides as another example parents have to prevent that their children watch violent movies. Finally it is better to use age limitation for kids or teenager when they want to use the media.
In conclusion, most of the time people believe that violent contexts of media cause to increase the teenager crimes. There would be several reasons however media is one of the most discussable ones in addition we debate the effects and the ways to avoid the raise of the crimes above.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.273195876289 0.247107183377 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.136597938144 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0773195876289 0.0946595960268 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0438144329897 0.0501214627716 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0489690721649 0.0437548338989 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14175257732 0.122226691241 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0180412371134 0.0403226058552 45% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.60097646828 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0283505154639 0.0326793684256 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.090206185567 0.0861772015684 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0128865979381 0.021408717616 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0103092783505 0.011925033212 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2131.0 1933.35771543 110% => OK
No of words: 356.0 316.048096192 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98595505618 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.379213483146 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.297752808989 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176966292135 0.203846283523 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0955056179775 0.137316102897 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60097646828 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530898876404 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 57.3973106334 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.25 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7280971824 49.517814964 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.1875 127.492653851 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1875 0.814263465372 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 52.0252808989 49.1944974215 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.88764044944 1.69124875643 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433626660048 0.332605444948 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115622202732 0.102741220458 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0733761798985 0.0668466124924 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.531965284305 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17606264543 0.148594505496 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180816450856 0.134430193775 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113641241531 0.0742795772207 153% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.380595363032 0.324371583561 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.058640702672 0.0638462369009 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332081039715 0.228012699653 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535201130191 0.058150111329 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 12.0 2.5751503006 466% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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