Animals habitats have been destroyed and some animals species. For example, the tigers have become endangered. Why does this happen? What can be done to protect this type of animals?
It is a highly debatable issue that animals territory have been demolished. Some animals have become hazard and their species have been extinct. So government should put their steps in for wildlife's protection and establish some bans in favour of those creatures.
Nowadays, animals are not left as much they have been before few decades ago. There are some reasons behind that. Firstly, scientists use animals instead of humans for their experimental aspects. Secondly, animal's body and their parts have been use for making cosmetics, leather items and so on. Lastly, some people hunt them for food and some for just entertainment purpose.
Moreover, to survival need stronger animals kill weaker ones and feed on them. This cycle is also important for environment. For some individuals, it is a religious activity to kill animals like Muslims. Whilst in some country vegetables are so costly so they have to survival on animals.
Furthermore, in today's fast growing world due to population accommodation is essential to do so more and more forest are converting into the residential zones, which are not preferable as animals homes. Some species like tigers have been extinct. Government should make some bans and provide special zones for these animals.
To sum up, animals are not humans. We should not use and kill them for our selfish needs and for entertainment. We should behave politely and humble to them. Otherwise, one day or another day they will extinct.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
It is a highly debatable issue that animals territory have been demolished. Some an...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'lastly', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237037037037 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0777777777778 0.0946595960268 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0740740740741 0.0501214627716 148% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0592592592593 0.0437548338989 135% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.1 0.122226691241 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0407407407407 0.0403226058552 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6633279881 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0259259259259 0.0326793684256 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0037037037037 0.00163938923432 226% => OK
Determiners: 0.062962962963 0.0861772015684 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0185185185185 0.021408717616 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00740740740741 0.011925033212 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1476.0 1933.35771543 76% => OK
No of words: 240.0 316.048096192 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.15 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279166666667 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183333333333 0.203846283523 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125 0.137316102897 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6633279881 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.037074148 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 59.1721482559 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.6315789474 20.7743622355 61% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5439817737 49.517814964 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6842105263 127.492653851 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6315789474 20.7743622355 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 0.814263465372 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 40.548245614 49.1944974215 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.25925925926 1.69124875643 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382603424664 0.332605444948 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0906573201453 0.102741220458 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0853358041943 0.0668466124924 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.475631573136 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128217397723 0.148594505496 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137915806726 0.134430193775 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806662636502 0.0742795772207 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.281476188036 0.324371583561 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0495482795351 0.0638462369009 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238863599101 0.228012699653 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613013442075 0.058150111329 105% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.41683366733 263% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 1.9629258517 357% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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