Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poor nations. Rich countries should pay more attention.
Now countries in the world has divided in to two categories. Those are developing and industrialised countries. This difference manly depends on the amount of money they spent for health, education and trade.
In the beginning, I would like to illustrate about poor countries. As an example Africa is in sub human condition due to lack of education, lack of natural resources, corruption, poverty, hunger and unemployment. Most of the people in this country suffer from hunger. According to reports, most of the rich countries destroy billion worth of unused extra food. They can provide these foods to poor people without destroying it. Another main problem in this country is the deadly disease, AIDS. Rich countries can provide better medicines and suitable resources to control this situation, because they have the capability and resources with proper knowledge.
Secondly, most of the developing countries sell their natural resources to industrialised countries for cheap price. Then they buy industrialised products for a high price resulting huge financial gap. Due to this most of the developing countries have huge debt. As a result, G8 countries decided to forgive billions of dollars of debt of developing countries.
In conclusion, I would like to say, as human beings we should help each other. Therefore, to make a better world, industrialised countries should play a major role in guiding the developing countries to achieve their targets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.249042145594 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.130268199234 0.155533422707 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.130268199234 0.0946595960268 138% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0229885057471 0.0501214627716 46% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0383141762452 0.0437548338989 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122605363985 0.122226691241 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0383141762452 0.0403226058552 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9592825984 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0459770114943 0.0326793684256 141% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0919540229885 0.0861772015684 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0229885057471 0.021408717616 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1469.0 1933.35771543 76% => OK
No of words: 230.0 316.048096192 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.38695652174 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20517956788 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.408695652174 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.330434782609 0.28420135186 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.226086956522 0.203846283523 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.195652173913 0.137316102897 142% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9592825984 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.037074148 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582608695652 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 57.416116776 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 14.375 20.7743622355 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6887387166 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8125 127.492653851 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 20.7743622355 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 47.4184782609 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 2.14 1.69124875643 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317947019877 0.332605444948 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103817486835 0.102741220458 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0870854406361 0.0668466124924 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.511446589048 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137954306902 0.148594505496 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125582010365 0.134430193775 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526107775676 0.0742795772207 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.307434689882 0.324371583561 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0480633141575 0.0638462369009 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219680227244 0.228012699653 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753727465096 0.058150111329 130% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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