You have just spend a week with a friend on holyday, when you got home you realize you have left your wallet thereWrite a letter to your friend in your letter:Thank your friend for the holidayExplain that you left your wallet in their houseGive them instr

Essay topics:

You have just spend a week with a friend on holyday, when you got home you realize you have left your wallet there
Write a letter to your friend in your letter:

Thank your friend for the holiday

Explain that you left your wallet in their house

Give them instruction of how to send it back to you

Hi Fahimeh,

I am writing this letter to thank you because of the amazing time we had last two weeks, especially for your fantastic game plans on the General Park also the phenomenal Jurassic park plan Arash really loved it.

Another reason to write you this letter is that I forgot to pick up my brown leather wallet from the drawer in Annie's room and all of my important cards and licenses were in that wallet like driving license or my ID card. I will be thankful if you send it back to me up to next week.

Actually, you can post the wallet to the address which I wrote on that Christmas card which I sent to you last month. That is my office address. As you know I spend most of my time in the office; So I can receive it during working time.

One again thanks you for the wonderful holiday anyway; I've got to go now. Write again if you need more information.
Missing you

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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'anyway', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'you know']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210526315789 0.220444632235 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.136842105263 0.167888034529 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0684210526316 0.0606518309736 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0473684210526 0.0506257000042 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.147368421053 0.118615021944 124% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105263157895 0.107062808482 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0210526315789 0.041066498444 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.27740710081 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0421052631579 0.0385302599488 109% => OK
Particles: 0.00526315789474 0.00132118243153 398% => OK
Determiners: 0.0789473684211 0.0714148451538 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0157894736842 0.0191574576366 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0105263157895 0.00930345855455 113% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 901.0 1141.60824742 79% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.134020619 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33136094675 5.53046319177 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78085437643 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.260355029586 0.284621296913 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.177514792899 0.211203875043 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0887573964497 0.133321485273 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0591715976331 0.0843313296314 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27740710081 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662721893491 0.622163163488 107% => OK
Word variations: 66.4986028329 62.8969750728 106% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 12.9587628866 69% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7777777778 16.4300151701 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.1464413949 44.7399317507 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.111111111 90.9928171075 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.4300151701 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.613754768223 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 36.5292570677 37.5504026743 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.01587301587 1.13073093955 90% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331332624162 0.331212695627 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109529285977 0.0927372745006 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0429184646232 0.0736520305886 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.664565894416 0.579516596996 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.198817172961 0.180689518051 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142648854665 0.122183219658 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574604392107 0.0765303033291 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.190902965331 0.211926503985 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0778414974599 0.0737400523855 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187175061981 0.203819188451 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159885762077 0.067151250289 24% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.45360824742 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
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Rates: 70.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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