You have just spend a week with a friend on holyday, when you got home you realize you have left your wallet there
Write a letter to your friend in your letter:
Thank your friend for the holiday
Explain that you left your wallet in their house
Give them instruction of how to send it back to you
Hi Fahimeh,
I am writing this letter to thank you because of the amazing time we had last two weeks, especially for your fantastic game plans on the General Park also the phenomenal Jurassic park plan Arash really loved it.
Another reason to write you this letter is that I forgot to pick up my brown leather wallet from the drawer in Annie's room and all of my important cards and licenses were in that wallet like driving license or my ID card. I will be thankful if you send it back to me up to next week.
Actually, you can post the wallet to the address which I wrote on that Christmas card which I sent to you last month. That is my office address. As you know I spend most of my time in the office; So I can receive it during working time.
One again thanks you for the wonderful holiday anyway; I've got to go now. Write again if you need more information.
Missing you
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...s you for the wonderful holiday anyway; Ive got to go now. Write again if you need ...
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'anyway', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'you know']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.214285714286 0.268076937826 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.142857142857 0.116061578633 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0714285714286 0.0759168565197 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0494505494505 0.0366838410393 135% => OK
Pronouns: 0.148351648352 0.0131127313244 1131% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10989010989 0.155750635184 71% => OK
Participles: 0.021978021978 0.0379272487307 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.17212156909 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Infinitives: 0.043956043956 0.0210936926555 208% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00549450549451 0.00175180941692 314% => OK
Determiners: 0.0824175824176 0.0948980150116 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0164835164835 0.00437022459523 377% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010989010989 0.00967000014798 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 889.0 1161.00487805 77% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.9 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26035502959 5.90752243213 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.254437869822 0.337110787985 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.165680473373 0.247514529752 67% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0769230769231 0.171178102325 45% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0473372781065 0.112407865282 42% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.17212156909 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662721893491 0.546246751206 121% => OK
Word variations: 66.4986028329 49.3433353143 135% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7777777778 23.0094962315 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.2040896015 42.9750493124 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7777777778 135.714022679 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 23.0094962315 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.689975730869 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 35.3458251151 47.7609492067 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.01612903226 2.94281807926 35% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333438862458 0.418131533498 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110311802601 0.181151798455 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0426500272055 0.0850326197045 50% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.665662511255 0.706616315825 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.196613761258 0.157042692854 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143487249258 0.228904883108 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057506014587 0.108899403657 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.19308007578 0.367819155151 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0781059468515 0.0812612215331 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188476636308 0.316326947829 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146262047608 0.0921553760075 16% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 3.0 7.1512195122 42% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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