The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
Author here has claimed that the actual talent of a musician can be evaluated on only after the musicians has lost his fame after some period of time.I completely agree with the author because music is something which need to be consistent. Musician performing well for a small period of time does not mean he has got talent.There are many reason due to which he have gain fame for some period of time.
Firstly,in today's generation a musician or singer becomes a youtube sensation by just performing excellently is a single song. They get a million views for that song and become popular. But this popularity is ephemeral , fades out with time. This does not mean that musician got a talent.Today's generation need to understand performing magnificently well in a some act does not mean he is talented.
A person can be a pundit in any sector by perseverance and hard work.Music is such a stream where a person needs to work very hard to gain fame.For being expert in music first we need to learn its basic chords deeply.I think a musician is said to be talented if his work is remembered even after a long time his fame is dead.Their followers should remember his song even after he has stops working.Then that person is truly talented.
In today's world some musician don't even know the basics of the music and become tell themselves a musician just by learning what is trending. This type musician also gains fame by the young people. But they are lost their popularity with the trend.
Thus,a true musician is the one who is remembered even after a long time he stops performing.I think today's generation should stop following the trend and should assess a musician who is proficient in his work.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203821656051 0.240241500013 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.226114649682 0.157235817809 144% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0923566878981 0.0880659088768 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0732484076433 0.0497285424764 147% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0509554140127 0.0444667217837 115% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101910828025 0.12292977631 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0573248407643 0.0406280797675 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65387934556 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0222929936306 0.030933414821 72% => OK
Particles: 0.0031847133758 0.0016655270985 191% => OK
Determiners: 0.117834394904 0.0997080785238 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015923566879 0.0249443105267 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0191082802548 0.0148568991511 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1894.0 2732.02544248 69% => OK
No of words: 299.0 452.878318584 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.33444816054 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.294314381271 0.366273622748 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.190635451505 0.280924506359 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170568561873 0.200843997647 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117056856187 0.132149295362 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65387934556 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 219.290929204 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505016722408 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 50.3620113018 55.4138127331 91% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6194690265 53% => OK
Sentence length: 27.1818181818 23.380412469 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 115.570593074 59.4972553346 194% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.181818182 141.124799967 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 23.380412469 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.909090909091 0.674092028746 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.21349557522 441% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.2453633323 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.03636363636 1.64882698954 63% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289364592228 0.391690518653 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106796148006 0.123202303941 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0747069897803 0.077325440228 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.632691702669 0.547984918172 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.232695051907 0.149214159877 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130479772861 0.161403998019 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636846010916 0.0892212321368 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.198879622276 0.385218514788 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0492121985529 0.0692045440612 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182610747995 0.275328986314 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711134810163 0.0653680567796 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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