Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefits more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
As some people may take the view that the traveling overseas is beneficial; however, others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that journey inside the home country is better than international traveling. I personally agree with the second belief. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons which persuade me to put forward this perspective.
The first reason which gives adherence to my outlook is that the traveling in the own country in cost effective. It is lucidly obvious that any travel requires the specific amount of expense, which in the case that the schedule of travel covers the foreign country trip, that cost will be at least duplicate. However, if the people’s aim of a journey solely is relaxation, they can prepare this demand in their country with a cheaper expense. A vivid example can be given to shed a light on the subject is my brother's example. Last month he planned to take a trip to take rid of his hectic life and meditate. He got aware about the various tours in or out of the country and compares their costs. Finally, he decided to take the trip to the north of Iran, where has the mild weather with fantastic sight-seeing. He took that trip merely with the one tenth of cost which is required for the foreign country trip.
The second case embraced my idea is that this travel furnishes the better information about the people's home country. Despite this fact which the whole cities in a specific country are controlled with the unique role, there is a list of differences, such as the cultural or ethnic variation, among the cities. Thus, based on these differences it is a sound idea to get familiar with their own country at first. Since if an individual does have an insufficient background about his or her own country, the information about the foreign countries is useless or meaningless.
The last indicator of my viewpoint's accuracy is that this type of travel can be considered as a financial benefit for the country. It is explicit as a crystal that whole expenses mentioned in the first body paragraph are the investment in that particular place, which boost its financial status and supplies to flourish its facilities and makes it more attractive. As a result, it a wise idea to invest that money in the home country. According to the noteworthy, intelligent statistic revealed from my country, approximately sixty-nine percent of the economic adherence of the touristic location in Iran are prepared from those cities' touristic income.
To wrap it up, based on the all aforementioned reasons one can logically draw the conclusion that it is advantageous for the people to take a trip in their own country to expand less money, get familiar with the culture of their country, and provide the financial support for their country's development.
Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'at least', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235741444867 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.12927756654 0.158761421928 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.11216730038 0.0866891130778 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0266159695817 0.046263068375 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0589353612167 0.0685040099705 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133079847909 0.118717715034 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0171102661597 0.0351676179071 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.77359292575 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0266159695817 0.0309702414327 86% => OK
Particles: 0.00190114068441 0.00188951952338 101% => OK
Determiners: 0.138783269962 0.0887237588012 156% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0152091254753 0.0209618222197 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0152091254753 0.0139019557991 109% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2842.0 2387.08602151 119% => OK
No of words: 481.0 408.028673835 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90852390852 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.343035343035 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.280665280665 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193347193347 0.174417080927 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118503118503 0.112833075102 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77359292575 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496881496881 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 57.5668085286 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.05 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3323208038 48.84282405 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.1 120.699889404 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.05 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.644075263715 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 52.1165280665 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.79646017699 1.45489161554 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310228614899 0.300154397459 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104879215246 0.103427244359 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0586563131928 0.0752933317313 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.569457520214 0.497263757937 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15897366161 0.151897553556 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127489416467 0.114077575197 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048438436707 0.0781384742642 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.46107907893 0.336927656856 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0417647861279 0.067059652881 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212398978694 0.210909579961 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190655977919 0.0618886996521 31% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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