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All of us need safe and convenience place for living. Hence, our neighbors have important role in our life. If we have best house but also we have very bad neighbors then we do not have a good living. But I think every person have different opinion about good neighbor. In my opinion good neighbor must do not make any unusual noise, have a normal character and they have kindly manner with other people.
For the first, I can say high noise makes me angry and I do not like have neighbor who play music loudly. For example, my uncle had a very beautiful home. This design was wonderful. But, there is one problem. Two young men live in his vicinity and they usually play guitar and sang very loudly. So he had to change his house. As you can noisy neighbor is very tremendous.
Another equally important reason is that you need to live with normal people to be safe. If you live near people whom have dangerous mind disease, you are not safe. For instance, my best friend, Ahmad, lives in apartment. He has to children, and they have to one crazy person who lives in their apartment. This condition causes a very stress for my friend and he is going to alter his apartment. Thus, safety is significant item for every place you want to live.
Last but not least is when you live with other people in a same region, every maneuver from those people can directly affect your family relationship. Likewise, if your neighbors have kindly manner then you can see warmer relation between your family’s members. In other hand, if your family has to see cold behavior everyday then you must expect similar conduct from them. Therefore kindly manner is another important item for good neighbor.
As the aforementioned examples illustrated quiet family, normal person and merciful people are a best candidate for living near us.
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- TPO 4 86
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 326, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... loudly. So he had to change his house. As you can noisy neighbor is very tremendo...
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Line 4, column 379, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... must expect similar conduct from them. Therefore kindly manner is another important item...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
..., normal person and merciful people are a best candidate for living near us.
^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'likewise', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203296703297 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.167582417582 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.118131868132 0.0866891130778 136% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0631868131868 0.046263068375 137% => OK
Pronouns: 0.104395604396 0.0685040099705 152% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0906593406593 0.118717715034 76% => OK
Participles: 0.0137362637363 0.0351676179071 39% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.38072192602 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.021978021978 0.0309702414327 71% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0494505494505 0.0887237588012 56% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0164835164835 0.0209618222197 79% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010989010989 0.0139019557991 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1825.0 2387.08602151 76% => OK
No of words: 322.0 408.028673835 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66770186335 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.304347826087 0.338922669872 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.192546583851 0.251872472559 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.136645962733 0.174417080927 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0900621118012 0.112833075102 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38072192602 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534161490683 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 56.0153655967 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5533526081 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1415933019 48.84282405 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.347826087 120.699889404 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.5533526081 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.652173913043 0.644075263715 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 33.2546583851 45.7405998639 73% => OK
Elegance: 0.918032786885 1.45489161554 63% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0647850847424 0.300154397459 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107158316494 0.103427244359 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0949814237415 0.0752933317313 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.447680518012 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180649778596 0.151897553556 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0228253477385 0.114077575197 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608708503451 0.0781384742642 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.18771684517 0.336927656856 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0742034885581 0.067059652881 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568765241561 0.210909579961 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711882137029 0.0618886996521 115% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.