When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
When it comes to the issue the importance of work hard, some people believe that advantage of working hard is more than that of waiting for the luck. However, others maintain the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
First and the most important reason is that hard work builds your character. As we all know, we are living in the midst the character crisis. If we can not have some thing in a short time, we do not it. If getting it is hard, forget it! However, when we work hard we can learn discipline, learn to manage our time and source. In addition, we will learn to ignore people who say that it can not be done. I think that there is not a better example than Cristiano Ronaldo, who was the former football player in Manchester United and Real Madrid. He was born in a poor family and no one though he someday will be a great man. Nonetheless, he left home when he had 12 years old for going the other city in order to improve their football skills. In short, hard work and more efforts make him a person with strong personalities, so that he never gives up in any situation. Therefore, he always is ready for embrace challenges and diversity of situation, because he gain the firmer knowledge of his abilities.
A further point we must consider is that hard work brings new opportunities. The lazy person usually complains and the lack of luck, while a smart person creates opportunities. I think that a small example can give some light to this topic. I f you stay at home, no one offers a job to you, unless you initiate the job searching process. A person who works in a company knows that his promotions depend on hard work. Edison’s famous words are related this matter:” opportunity is missed by people because it always dressed in overalls and it looks like a work.”
Apart from points I made above hard work allows you to draw attractions. We are living in cultures that encourage and foist the minimal efforts. It does not matter who are you, how many you have talents, or what you are called to work. The important issue is that feel it with your heart and do it with you passions, and soon the world will be watching your works. “a person who is called streets sweeper, should sweep streets as Michelangelo painted, Beethoven composed music, Shakespeare wrote poetries. He should sweep streets so well that all hosts of heaven and earth will pause to say, here lived a great street weeper, who did his job very well” Martine Luther King.
All above evidence supports the undeniable fact that hard work builds your character, brings new opportunities and draw attentions. Admittedly, as an English proverb goes “a coin has two sides”; therefore, those who have the opposite view partly reasonable that hard work usually is cumbersome and difficult. Nevertheless, I strongly think that its benefits outweigh dangerous. Last but not least, let us hope people gain the deeper insight of life, and detect that they can build their favorite life just by hard work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 161, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...he character crisis. If we can not have some thing in a short time, we do not it. If getti...
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Line 2, column 657, Rule ID: HAVE_CD_YEARS[1]
Message: This phrase is used with 'be': 'been 12 years old'.
Suggestion: been 12 years old
...man. Nonetheless, he left home when he had 12 years old for going the other city in order to im...
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Line 2, column 882, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is always
...ives up in any situation. Therefore, he always is ready for embrace challenges and divers...
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Line 2, column 960, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gains'.
Suggestion: gains
... and diversity of situation, because he gain the firmer knowledge of his abilities. ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'apart from', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in short']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220820189274 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.165615141956 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0820189274448 0.0866891130778 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0552050473186 0.046263068375 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0883280757098 0.0685040099705 129% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0946372239748 0.118717715034 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0220820189274 0.0351676179071 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57721285117 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0141955835962 0.0309702414327 46% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00157728706625 0.00188951952338 83% => OK
Determiners: 0.0820189274448 0.0887237588012 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.018927444795 0.0209618222197 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0205047318612 0.0139019557991 147% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3123.0 2387.08602151 131% => OK
No of words: 548.0 408.028673835 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69890510949 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83832613839 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.306569343066 0.338922669872 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.20802919708 0.251872472559 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.140510948905 0.174417080927 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0912408759124 0.112833075102 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57721285117 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 300.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 69.1127980687 59.2087087015 117% => OK
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6684587814 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2666666667 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5453863989 48.84282405 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 39.0695863747 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.09183673469 1.45489161554 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343049524139 0.300154397459 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0845308926381 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0730509436127 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.397858031461 0.497263757937 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.102792821558 0.151897553556 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960290829789 0.114077575197 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663736500658 0.0781384742642 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.296138956722 0.336927656856 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0451097944445 0.067059652881 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21925003404 0.210909579961 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372627181089 0.0618886996521 60% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.4623655914 325% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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