Business should do anything they can to make a profit. Do you agree or disagree?
It is established beyond doubt that success is one of the greatest and important life goals for every human being all around the world. In this case, a plethora of people run their own businesses in order to reach their purpose without taking merits and demerits into account. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether in order to make a living, people should conduct everything they want by their own business or not. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, to the extent that my personal perspective is concerned, doing everything in businesses can bring many inevitable consequences not only for people's life but also for whole world. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that not every businesses is ethical. Scientifically speaking, it goes without saying that some businesses are successful. For example, computers game are a very successful business, but they greatly impact children's behavior. As a matter of fact, they may rise the rate of violence among children. Another alternative is corporation like McDonald's that sell fast food to children. We all know that in what extent pre-prepared meal can put people into danger. Delving further into the issue reveal that according to Canadian pediatric society, a quarter of children in North America are now obese. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that crowds of people are at the risk of different diseases when people just take their profit into consideration by their own business. I believe that it is an unacceptable situation and steps must be taken to make drastic changes.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that just making a profit may overwhelmed environment by serious negative impacts. Broadly speaking, many companies, which earn a hoard of money have harmful effects to the nature such as pollution or deforestation and so forth. Not only can they prevent people from lead a healthy lifestyle but also can put whole natural resources into danger or even extinction. To put it in other word, government should enact some rules for businesses in order to preserve environment. Although laws in most countries prosecute those action, some business keep breaking it without any punishment. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, if businesses make a suitable profit not only can they recover a country from recession but also can provide fertile ground for people to find a decent and well-paid job. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, make a profit by businesses has its own benefits and drawbacks. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that successful business such as fast food restaurants can be thread for the people's health and worsened their living condition. In addition, harmful effects to the nature by their actions is of the most significant problems that should be taken into consideration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 573, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this action' or 'those actions'?
Suggestion: this action; those actions
...though laws in most countries prosecute those action, some business keep breaking it without...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... food restaurants can be thread for the peoples health and worsened their living condit...
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Line 7, column 407, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat should be taken into consideration.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'well', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241197183099 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.153169014085 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0915492957746 0.0866891130778 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.068661971831 0.046263068375 148% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0475352112676 0.0685040099705 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121478873239 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.044014084507 0.0351676179071 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9305168476 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0281690140845 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00176056338028 0.00188951952338 93% => OK
Determiners: 0.0880281690141 0.0887237588012 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0264084507042 0.0209618222197 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0158450704225 0.0139019557991 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3227.0 2387.08602151 135% => OK
No of words: 520.0 408.028673835 127% => OK
Chars per words: 6.20576923077 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.394230769231 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.303846153846 0.251872472559 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221153846154 0.174417080927 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153846153846 0.112833075102 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9305168476 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542307692308 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 66.9922852978 59.2087087015 113% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4247283568 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.08 120.699889404 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 51.1846153846 45.7405998639 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.50980392157 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154285120555 0.300154397459 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0796194515286 0.103427244359 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0643604834292 0.0752933317313 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.396754061304 0.497263757937 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124168074084 0.151897553556 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549057814813 0.114077575197 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03962248404 0.0781384742642 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.35692821382 0.336927656856 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0503199143351 0.067059652881 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11914336025 0.210909579961 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416035647557 0.0618886996521 67% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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