sports stars and movie stars should an obligation to younger people who follow them.they earned million of dollars. they should encourage people to give in society responsibility.
The Statement contends that Sports stars and movies straes should as role model for the young people who look up to them.Sports stars and movie stars earn million of dollers form advertisements and from all other activities.Sports stars earns money through playing sports and get different awards and prizes from state goverment and also central goverment.And they should donate their some of their money to societal responsibility and in other charity works or trusts.I agree with assertation that Stars should donate their money on scocial work and charitable trusts which help to poor people either they were suffring scocial problem or finacial problem.Those stars contribution encourge to younger genreation to also donate their money for social responsibility.
However , All the younger genreation like either sports star or movie star or both.They follow stars as stars do.They use products which stars use in advertisments.But, One thing that they do not follow stars for social responsibility.Stars have to social responsiblities that make younger people encourge of it.Stars have to do it beacause they earn million of dollars in advertisements and their repective fields.They have to behave as role model as scocial responsisbility not as shown in movie and field.
In recent years ,i read the newspaper in gallery and show that one of my favorite star donate his money for blind chaild in charitable trust.The next day ,i was shoked to saw newspaper.The editor many of the people gave donetion of million of dollars beacuse all they are fan of his.showing to this example its clearly seen that either movie stars or sports stars encourage to younger generation to gave their responsibility through their scocity.
Finally,I conclude that there is big fans of movie stars and sports stars in country.They follow to their ideal and people should follow their stars as good behaviour and bad behaviour.
In ,Sum i agree with assertation that Movie stars and sports stars should gave their help to scoieatal responsiblility either givivng their to charitable trust or in events which help to poor people and also encorage to younger generations so they have also give posssible best to their scocity.
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...o younger generations so they have also give posssible best to their scocity.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.309589041096 0.240241500013 129% => OK
Verbs: 0.150684931507 0.157235817809 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0931506849315 0.0880659088768 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.027397260274 0.0497285424764 55% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0630136986301 0.0444667217837 142% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.131506849315 0.12292977631 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0164383561644 0.0406280797675 40% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.01737232268 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0493150684932 0.030933414821 159% => OK
Particles: 0.0027397260274 0.0016655270985 164% => OK
Determiners: 0.0301369863014 0.0997080785238 30% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.013698630137 0.0249443105267 55% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.013698630137 0.0148568991511 92% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2217.0 2732.02544248 81% => OK
No of words: 354.0 452.878318584 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.26271186441 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361581920904 0.366273622748 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237288135593 0.280924506359 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161016949153 0.200843997647 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11581920904 0.132149295362 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01737232268 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 219.290929204 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471751412429 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 48.7276112795 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6194690265 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 70.8 23.380412469 303% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 198.493727861 59.4972553346 334% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 443.4 141.124799967 314% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.8 23.380412469 303% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.4 0.674092028746 208% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.21349557522 518% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 94.5288135593 51.4728631049 184% => OK
Elegance: 1.89772727273 1.64882698954 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.541667769101 0.391690518653 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.259780760745 0.123202303941 211% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0569062133108 0.077325440228 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 1.48952049195e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.373297006062 0.161403998019 231% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353027278841 0.0892212321368 40% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.339308695909 0.385218514788 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0542301209168 0.0692045440612 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.373297006062 0.275328986314 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353027278841 0.0653680567796 54% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.5995575221 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.