Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success
There is no doubt that trying to reach the goals plays the predominant role in every one's life. People may show the variaty of the emotions and feeling when they reach their target or not. A debating question is raised related to the issue is that how much important is being happy in these situations? Some people may hold the viewpoint that being happy is very important when one person fall on the ground. However, others watch this issue from the opposite lens and believe that being happy belongs the achieving goals. In my perspective, the first belief is true. I what follows, I will pinpoint some of outstanding reasons.
One of the most important reason coming mind related to the statement is that it can boost selfconfidence. When one perons make the mistake or has some flows in his way and consequently, he is not able to give his target in his hands, he will be disappointed. Being happy in this adverse condistion helps him to sit up again with more energy and more enthusiasm to reach the goals. For example, one of my friends, he always have a smile on his libs in every time, even in drastic situation. Two years ago, both of us want to be accepted in one of the most prestigous university, but he could not. Although it was a big defeat for him, he was able to compensate this fault in the next year. He said to me, without having good sense about future and being happy, nothing can be achievable.
Furthermore, the equally important reason supported my idea is from the psychological stand point. The group of the people who are more happy than others, specially in bad situations, they can demonstrate more eager to counterbalance the situation and be success. This means that when one person fails in his way to achieving his targets, if he has a genuine interest in being success and making up his failure, he should show it to himself and pretend himself he can. Take Isac Edison, as an example. He was one the most withstanding person in the world history. He succeeded to bring the light into his home after more than thousant failures. He has a smile on his face and said, always after when he failed, " this failure can be the start for all person, personally for me". So, being happy and pessimestic is more important when one fails.
The last but not the least reason is that if one person is happy after his failures, this means that he has a very vigrous personality. Therefore, he can frighten his competitors by this feature. An empirical test, conducted in west Asia, obviously depicts this fact that more than 80 pecents of people who suceed after failures are more optimistic person than others. This clarify the fact that, if one laghs after failure and thinks how he can compensate this faults, this can give him the more enrgy. In addition to this his competitors may show his action and find his strong personality. So, he can be more success.
From what has been mentioned above, we can safely reach the conclusion that being happy and optimestic is one of the most important things after one's failure. It is hard to disquise the fact that more people believe that just the winner has the being happy right. Despite of this fact, having smile on lips and being happy have profound influence on being success after failure. All in all. it is anticipated that people will consider to the above statement more and more if they want to achieve their goals after they fail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'in addition', 'no doubt']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.182621502209 0.229887763892 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.160530191458 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0898379970545 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0486008836524 0.046263068375 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0824742268041 0.0685040099705 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114874815906 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.039764359352 0.0351676179071 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.48097693693 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0250368188513 0.0309702414327 81% => OK
Particles: 0.00294550810015 0.00188951952338 156% => OK
Determiners: 0.0986745213549 0.0887237588012 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0265095729013 0.0209618222197 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0176730486009 0.0139019557991 127% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3432.0 2387.08602151 144% => OK
No of words: 609.0 408.028673835 149% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6354679803 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96768813016 4.48200974243 111% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.272577996716 0.338922669872 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.193760262726 0.251872472559 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.137931034483 0.174417080927 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0903119868637 0.112833075102 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48097693693 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451559934319 0.524397521467 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.8528679661 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6684587814 160% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4545454545 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8193934933 48.84282405 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.393939393939 0.644075263715 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 37.8305717271 45.7405998639 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.15656565657 1.45489161554 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27490566223 0.300154397459 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0682045144712 0.103427244359 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0559063628921 0.0752933317313 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.449469158097 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141152090522 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991177403226 0.114077575197 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063345007617 0.0781384742642 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.466898061218 0.336927656856 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.100562973625 0.067059652881 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198772552419 0.210909579961 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397091505119 0.0618886996521 64% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8870967742 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 8.42114695341 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.6433691756 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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