You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend.
Explain why you have moved
Describe a new house
Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to inform you that I’ve finally got a new job in Dnepr city. Thus, there was a necessity to sell my old house and buy a new one closer to my new work. Sorry to say, it was not so simple as it seems. Eventually, I’ve adapted to the new place and want to share my impression with you.
The new house of mine is much bigger than old one. There are a lot of space to play for my young charges. They look very happy, when playing on a lawn in the yard. There are for rooms in the house, including lounge, a big kitchen, a wide hallway. All of the rooms are furnished.
I also want to tell you, that my new company will give 3 days off during the forthcoming holidays. I’ve been thinking a lot and decided that it would be great if your family joins me on the holidays. You’d see my new place, fry some barbeques on my new grill, attend some excursion in Dnepr.
Looking forward for your answer.
Your sincerely,
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
... lounge, a big kitchen, a wide hallway. All of the rooms are furnished. I also want to ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.19298245614 0.220444632235 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.144736842105 0.167888034529 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0789473684211 0.0606518309736 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0438596491228 0.0506257000042 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.105263157895 0.118615021944 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0964912280702 0.107062808482 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0263157894737 0.041066498444 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.29052370657 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0350877192982 0.0385302599488 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0789473684211 0.0714148451538 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00877192982456 0.0191574576366 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00438596491228 0.00930345855455 47% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 970.0 1141.60824742 85% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.134020619 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30054644809 5.53046319177 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78085437643 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.229508196721 0.284621296913 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.158469945355 0.211203875043 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.109289617486 0.133321485273 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0819672131148 0.0843313296314 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29052370657 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650273224044 0.622163163488 105% => OK
Word variations: 65.6304657798 62.8969750728 104% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 12.9587628866 108% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0714285714 16.4300151701 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1838975446 44.7399317507 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2857142857 90.9928171075 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0714285714 16.4300151701 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.613754768223 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 28.9184231069 37.5504026743 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.07462686567 1.13073093955 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219163760847 0.331212695627 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0880773191542 0.0927372745006 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.066055811656 0.0736520305886 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.554648071089 0.579516596996 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155718926848 0.180689518051 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806837868693 0.122183219658 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686122311515 0.0765303033291 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.110009930273 0.211926503985 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0592911273879 0.0737400523855 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12376827638 0.203819188451 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09160613961 0.067151250289 136% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.56701030928 234% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 8.32989690722 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.