Many governments think that economic progress is the most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. discuss...
For the last years, people in high developed countries become more consumptive and materialistic. Money is most important achievement for everyone. Contemporary governments try to build lots of different manufacturing in order to make a country richer. As a result, a vast part of budget spends for plants, factories that pollutes environment. In this essay I want to discuss what causes this problem and what people could do to resolve it.
Firstly, I want to say that economic development is very important. Country needs some quantity of money to maintain educational facilities, medical care, entertainment and list goes on and on. It’s impossible to support nations life without money. However, governments incline to increase only economical part of a country at any cost. Thus, hospitals could be left without appropriate quantity of medicine, university students ought to purchase books for their own money at cetera.
Moreover, a lot of different countries that raised their economic status, now straggling with other problems that excess quantity of money could inflict. To give a clear example, there are a lot of criminal people are tending to immigrate to USA, Great Britain, Canada to earn money. Therefore, a level of crimes will raise.
In my opinion, modern people forget that money won’t make us happy. A matter of human’s life is to live a posterity and take care of a nature. Nowadays life compels people to build lots of manufacturing, but we need to remember about impact it makes on environment and do everything possible to save the nature.
In conclusion, I’d like to say that economic progress is very important goal, but it is not most important. There are a lot of different types of progress that are more important than economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...and on. It's impossible to support nations life without money. However, government...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254385964912 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.154970760234 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.093567251462 0.0946595960268 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0438596491228 0.0501214627716 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0350877192982 0.0437548338989 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114035087719 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.00877192982456 0.0403226058552 22% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.95009435718 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0526315789474 0.0326793684256 161% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0526315789474 0.0861772015684 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0146198830409 0.021408717616 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0146198830409 0.011925033212 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1782.0 1933.35771543 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1660899654 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387543252595 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.311418685121 0.28420135186 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.23875432526 0.203846283523 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148788927336 0.137316102897 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95009435718 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595155709343 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 64.6658023079 60.7387585426 106% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0555555556 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7571824001 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 127.492653851 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 47.1974240677 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.6125 1.69124875643 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291035211594 0.332605444948 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0679976158387 0.102741220458 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0597472088858 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.486451544178 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141684129031 0.148594505496 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10977648598 0.134430193775 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896347018767 0.0742795772207 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.259218993964 0.324371583561 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0449485474069 0.0638462369009 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198948134098 0.228012699653 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117745175301 0.058150111329 202% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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