Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss the both these views and give your own opinion.
It is rightly said criminals are not born, circumstance lead to the person become the criminal. So, it is vital to consider the situation under what the crime has been executed. However, many adepts argue that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime irrespective of the motive behind it. I discord the statement and would like to represent valid arguments to understand both the aspect and in support of my inclination.
Based on the report of many surveys conducted on the criminal, it has been revealed that between 30-40% of the crime has been attempted under the pressure of circumstance and without having any visible motive. For instance, many a time a murder can be attempted in order to do self-defence or to save someone's life. Secondly, there are many underdeveloped and developing countries where crime rate is increasing tremendously. There are specific crime like theft, shoplifting, kidnapping, snatching, prostitution are flourishing in order to earn livelihood. When we analyse the motive behind the crime, we would find that 70% crime out of mentioned above has been done due to poverty, lake of employment and for survival. These are one of the root cause of many crime flourished today. To exemplify, if we consider the survey rolled out on the terrorists during terror attacks, we will come to know that many terrorists are young and misguided due to the lake of education , poverty and unemployment. To reduce the crime due to basic reasons, legislations need to be provided with consideration of situation and motive behind. If evidence supports the person, he should be treated with mercy than professional criminals so that we can serve mankind and save society from increase number of criminals.
On the other hand, there are many crimes which are considers as sins in eye of mankind. For instance, sedition, rape, child abusing, human trafficking and so on. The victim of this crime is not get hurt only physically but also disturbs psychologically. Such offences are black spot for the society and should not be forgiveable at all. In such case, criminal should be treated with the utter sentences which can spread a lesson for others so that it would not be conducted by anyone else.
All in all, strong and fair jurisdiction would be the base of safety and security of the country and its citizen. so, in my strongly believe that the legislation should be designed to help the people not to increase the anarchy of the society. so, there must be different approach for different situation which can lead to give the true justice for the offence.
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It is rightly said criminals
It is rightly said criminals are not born, circumstances lead the person to become the criminal. So, it is vital to consider the situation under what the crime has been executed. However, many adepts argue that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime irrespective of the motive behind it. I discord the statement and would like to represent valid arguments to understand both the aspects as follows.
Based on the report of many surveys conducted on the criminals, it has been revealed that between 30-40% of the crimes have been attempted under the pressure of circumstances and without having any visible motive. For instance, many a time a murder can be attempted in order to do self-defence or to save someone's life. Secondly, there are many underdeveloped and developing countries where crime rate is increasing tremendously. There are specific crime like theft, shoplifting, kidnapping, snatching, prostitution are flourishing in order to earn livelihood. When we analyse the motive behind the crime, we would find that 70% crime out of the mentioned above have been done due to poverty, lake of employment and for the survival. These are the few of the root causes for the increasing crime today. To exemplify, if we consider the survey rolled out on the terrorists arrested during the terror attacks, we will come to know that many terrorists are young and misguided due to the lake of education , poverty and unemployment. To reduce the crime cultivated for the survival, legislations need to be designed with the consideration of situation and motive behind. If evidence supports the person, he should be treated with mercy than professional criminals so that we can serve mankind and save society from increase number of criminals.
On the other hand, there are many crimes which are considers as sins in eye of mankind. For instance, sedition, rape, child abusing, human trafficking and so on. The victim of this crime is not only getting hurt physically but also disturbed psychologically. Such offences are black spot for the society and should not be forgiveable at all. In such case, criminal should be treated with the utter sentences which can spread a lesson for others so that it would not be conducted by anyone else.
All in all, strong and fair jurisdiction would be the base of safety and security of the country and its citizen. so, in my strongly believe that the legislation should be designed to help the people not to increase the anarchy of the society. so, there must be different approach for different situation which can lead to give the true justice for the offence.
It is rightly said criminals
It is rightly said criminals are not born, circumstances lead the person to become the criminal. So, it is vital to consider the situation under what the crime has been executed. However, many adepts argue that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime irrespective of the motive behind it. I discord the statement and would like to represent valid arguments to understand both the aspects as follows.
Based on the report of many surveys conducted on the criminals, it has been revealed that between 30-40% of the crimes have been attempted under the pressure of circumstances and without having any visible motive. For instance, many a time a murder can be attempted in order to do self-defence or to save someone's life. Secondly, there are many underdeveloped and developing countries where crime rate is increasing tremendously. There are specific crime like theft, shoplifting, kidnapping, snatching, prostitution are flourishing in order to earn livelihood. When we analyse the motive behind the crime, we would find that 70% crime out of the mentioned above have been done due to poverty, lake of employment and for the survival. These are the few of the root causes for the increasing crime today. To exemplify, if we consider the survey rolled out on the terrorists arrested during the terror attacks, we will come to know that many terrorists are young and misguided due to the lake of education , poverty and unemployment. To reduce the crime cultivated for the survival, legislations need to be designed with the consideration of situation and motive behind. If evidence supports the person, he should be treated with mercy than professional criminals so that we can serve mankind and save society from increase number of criminals.
On the other hand, there are many crimes which are considers as sins in eye of mankind. For instance, sedition, rape, child abusing, human trafficking and so on. The victim of this crime is not only getting hurt physically but also disturbed psychologically. Such offences are black spot for the society and should not be forgiveable at all. In such case, criminal should be treated with the utter sentences which can spread a lesson for others so that it would not be conducted by anyone else.
All in all, strong and fair jurisdiction would be the base of safety and security of the country and its citizen. so, in my strongly believe that the legislation should be designed to help the people not to increase the anarchy of the society. so, there must be different approach for different situation which can lead to give the true justice for the offence.
Essay evaluation report
It is rightly said criminals are not born, circumstances lead the person to become the criminal.
It is rightly said criminals are not born, and circumstances lead the person to become the criminal. //these are two sentences
there are many crimes which are considers as
there are many crimes which are considered as
there must be different approach for different situation
there must be different approaches for different situations
Sentence: Such offences are black spot for the society and should not be forgiveable at all.
Error: forgiveable Suggestion: forgivable
flaws:
1. The second paragraph is too long. When it is too long, most likely the content is not well organized. better to separate it to two paragraphs.
2. The first sentence of a paragraph should be topic sentences to make it clear what is going to talk about in this paragraph, like:
First, what is the motive behind the crimes. ....
Second, root causes should be taken into considerations. ....
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 436 350
No. of Characters: 2103 1500
No. of Different Words: 231 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.57 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.823 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.727 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 141 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 79 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.947 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.085 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.579 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.296 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.467 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.077 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 757, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun crime seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much crime', 'a good deal of crime'.
Suggestion: much crime; a good deal of crime
...val. These are one of the root cause of many crime flourished today. To exemplify, if we c...
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Line 3, column 950, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...errorists are young and misguided due to the lake of education , poverty and unem...
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Line 3, column 973, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... misguided due to the lake of education , poverty and unemployment. To reduce the...
^^
Line 3, column 1181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...upports the person, he should be treated with mercy than professional criminals s...
^^
Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne else. All in all, strong and fair jurisdiction would be the base of safety...
^^
Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ecurity of the country and its citizen. so, in my strongly believe that the legisl...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...to increase the anarchy of the society. so, there must be different approach for d...
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Line 7, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fferent approach for different situation which can lead to give the true justice ...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for instance', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239175257732 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.177319587629 0.155533422707 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0659793814433 0.0946595960268 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0432989690722 0.0501214627716 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0309278350515 0.0437548338989 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129896907216 0.122226691241 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0536082474227 0.0403226058552 133% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81437739418 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0350515463918 0.0326793684256 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0020618556701 0.00163938923432 126% => OK
Determiners: 0.0886597938144 0.0861772015684 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0309278350515 0.021408717616 144% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0123711340206 0.011925033212 104% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2610.0 1933.35771543 135% => OK
No of words: 437.0 316.048096192 138% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97254004577 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20517956788 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33180778032 0.374742101984 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.24942791762 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201372997712 0.203846283523 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139588100686 0.137316102897 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81437739418 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.037074148 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54004576659 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 62.9902657009 60.7387585426 104% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8095238095 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4289920893 49.517814964 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.285714286 127.492653851 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8095238095 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.814263465372 53% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.7523155715 49.1944974215 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.68032786885 1.69124875643 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471476702125 0.332605444948 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0967172898308 0.102741220458 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0541495829491 0.0668466124924 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.495597411303 0.534860350844 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133424044541 0.148594505496 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185706513101 0.134430193775 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101165517879 0.0742795772207 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.452134609662 0.324371583561 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0989510568862 0.0638462369009 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.364756128187 0.228012699653 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274917053639 0.058150111329 47% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 14.0 2.5751503006 544% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 18.0 10.4468937876 172% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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