Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. DISCUSS and give your opinion.
People have different views concerning the way how illegalities should be judged. While some people believe that each misdeed ought to have its own definite sentence, I hold the notion that factors contribute to executing the criminal act such as conditions and motives should play the major role behind each judgmental decision.
On the one hand, applying a set of sanctions for variable crimes, regardless the situation behind these crimes, this may form a hindrance for people from committing unlawful actions. If people knew that they will be sentenced to hard labor for taking bribe, there would be reluctance in getting accused with such crime; therefore, rates of law offenders can sharply decrease leaving society more secured. Thus, vast numbers of countries, one of which is Sweden, have achieved a remarkable decrement in crimes’ rates according to a survey by the Daily Mail in 2017. As a result, the more strict the punishments get, the more obedient the people become.
On the other hand, I would side with those who suppose that judging defendants has to be done individually, with putting in consideration all the hidden reasons for each situation. As some minor illegalities should be used to correct the behavior of its committers; moreover, imprisonment in such actions may not be the proper way to alter people’s attitude. For instance, applying parole and community service for students who get accused with burglary may have considerable positive impacts on their reforming rather than sentencing them to jail with murderers. It is, thus, recommended for authorities not to underestimate the evaluation of the situation before making their decisions.
To conclude, despite the capability of fixed punishments to improve people’s attitude and decrease crime rates, I opine that it is not applicable for all illegal actions as some might need to be approached differently in order to mitigate crime in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32686084142 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92371493957 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614886731392 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5159233029 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.636363636 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316365780742 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111599822141 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562517773839 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190931121055 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177359783136 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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