Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In today's modern era, everybody is surrounded by technology and technology drives our lives from morning to night. Be it communication, transport, education or networking, technology has brought a huge change in the way we live. I disagree with the statement that technology makes our lives complicated instead of simplifying it.
Decades ago, when mobile phones were not available, one has to send letters for communicating with their near and dear ones and that took days. Inventions of electromagnetic waves has made this so simple that you can reach to your relative in any corner of the world within a second. Moreover, after invention of internet, you can also video call on skype etc, which makes you feel like you are infront of your relative abroad. Not only personal communication but also proffesional communication has become easier and as a result globalisation of businesses has become possible. An IT company in US can get order from an client from Uganda and also get paid online.
Social networking has made a huge change in a way we live. With Facebook you can be in touch with your friends and know whats going on in their lives without meeting them. Also platforms like Quora has made very easy to get information on any topic from experts of that field and that too at free of cost. Also with platforms like Edx.org, you can world class education from top universities like Harvard and MIT at the comfort of your home and that to free of cost. Also nowadays, there are lots of apps available in smartphones to govern almost any need of our lives.
Technology has also improved the ways of transportation. The discovery of steam engine and internal combustion engine has revolutionised the transport. Bikes, scooters, cars, aeroplanes, trains etc has made private as well as public transport very easy.
It is also true that you have to make yourself acquainted with technology, otherwise it may be a reason of discomfort or shame. For example, if you accidently post very private photos of you on facebook, you may invite social shame to you. Also being addicted whatsapp, facebook etc has caused mental enxiety. Some people has to check their messages and FB account like thousand times a day and they feel uneasy if they don't. Though these things complex our lives, their advantages are far more better than these small things.
In short, if you make yourself acquainted with technology it can be hugely simplify your life.
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Comments
Grammar and spelling errors:
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...on in their lives without meeting them. Also platforms like Quora has made very easy...
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...to govern almost any need of our lives. Technology has also improved the ways of...
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...ar more better than these small things. In short, if you make yourself acquainte...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'in short', 'as a result', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244060475162 0.240241500013 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.157667386609 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.07343412527 0.0880659088768 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0669546436285 0.0497285424764 135% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0842332613391 0.0444667217837 189% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.144708423326 0.12292977631 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0453563714903 0.0406280797675 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74516135039 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0194384449244 0.030933414821 63% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0539956803456 0.0997080785238 54% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0172786177106 0.0249443105267 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00431965442765 0.0148568991511 29% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2479.0 2732.02544248 91% => OK
No of words: 417.0 452.878318584 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9448441247 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.321342925659 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.223021582734 0.280924506359 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170263788969 0.200843997647 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129496402878 0.132149295362 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74516135039 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 219.290929204 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563549160671 0.48968727796 115% => OK
Word variations: 66.4374761935 55.4138127331 120% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8571428571 23.380412469 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8449592266 59.4972553346 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.047619048 141.124799967 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 23.380412469 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.619047619048 0.674092028746 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.21349557522 288% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.1593011305 51.4728631049 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.40559440559 1.64882698954 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335987819055 0.391690518653 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0922418524698 0.123202303941 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0887316450948 0.077325440228 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.507622783149 0.547984918172 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.154188165933 0.149214159877 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116258096814 0.161403998019 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745105014803 0.0892212321368 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.220759406 0.385218514788 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.116918635803 0.0692045440612 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199765833855 0.275328986314 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631646820638 0.0653680567796 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
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