The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The authority for the well-being of a society is generally given to a handful people who are deemed by the people as responsible and capable. These people help in ensuring that an order is maintained in the society thereby improving the well-being of the society. However, when the authority is given the freedom to function independently, without being answerable to the citizens, it might become detrimental as they might not fear or think critically before taking important decisions.
A person ,no matter how sincere, becomes negligent in his duties and responsibilities when he has no one to answer to. Thus, if the authority responsible for maintaining the social order in the society becomes answerable to no one, then it will not consider taking the decisions which will be harmful for the people living in the society. Moreover, when people question the authority at regular intervals, the power that these handful people yield, is kept in check. Thus, the misuse of power is also kept in check. If the authority becomes unquestionable, then it ultimately turns into a monarchy, where few people exercise unlimited power. A simple example to portray this would be Adolf Hitler. When after 1st World War, Germany as a nation was completely destroyed. It was in economic ruins. Thus, Adolf Hitler took the responsibility of improving the the economic conditions of Germany and thus arrange a coup-de-tat in order to overthrow the slack government. People being happy with the work of Adolf Hitler, did not question his authority. However, as time passed Adolf Hitler grew bolder and did not bother to become answerable to the society. As a result, Adolf Hitler single-handedly decided to wage second world war, which ultimately led Germany into ruins. Thus, in order to maintain checks and balances in the society, it is essential for the people to question their authority.
However, there are some instances where people questioning the authority becomes detrimental. A critical example of this would be matters related to national defence. These crucial decisions should devoid of public questioning, because they impact the national security. Moreover, decisions which require prompt response, the questioning of the decisions by the public will cause harmful delays.
Thus, it is very much essential that people question their authority in order to maintain the well being of a society because, these very checks ensure that the authority performs their duties diligently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: the
...er took the responsibility of improving the the economic conditions of Germany and thus...
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Suggestion: the; the
...er took the responsibility of improving the the economic conditions of Germany and thus...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233707865169 0.240241500013 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.157303370787 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0741573033708 0.0880659088768 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0696629213483 0.0497285424764 140% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0314606741573 0.0444667217837 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107865168539 0.12292977631 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0449438202247 0.0406280797675 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84742629078 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0337078651685 0.030933414821 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.123595505618 0.0997080785238 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0179775280899 0.0249443105267 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0247191011236 0.0148568991511 166% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2490.0 2732.02544248 91% => OK
No of words: 397.0 452.878318584 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.27204030227 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.428211586902 0.366273622748 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.304785894207 0.280924506359 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221662468514 0.200843997647 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.151133501259 0.132149295362 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84742629078 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 219.290929204 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468513853904 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 50.1601172406 55.4138127331 91% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9047619048 23.380412469 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7278768425 59.4972553346 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.571428571 141.124799967 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9047619048 23.380412469 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.47619047619 0.674092028746 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 49.3833513254 51.4728631049 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.49565217391 1.64882698954 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492580667224 0.391690518653 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.136057440037 0.123202303941 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.099867478151 0.077325440228 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.490131429852 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.215813332913 0.149214159877 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188942366065 0.161403998019 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118785005921 0.0892212321368 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.366548557204 0.385218514788 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.165549783411 0.0692045440612 239% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.342716198895 0.275328986314 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933787310312 0.0653680567796 143% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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